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Raisins of Heart To Whom

Hidden raisin
Holden in the heart
And so the chase is after choice
Pick the bomb
Or pick the rose
In every woman - explosive
If the man doesn’t know how to deal with
It may blow
Every woman is a rose
If the man knows how to warm needy heart
Her emotion
When she ask u: why u late
In her emotion
Asking what: teasing what
Do you love me; still, baby?
Are you caring?
I am waiting u all the night-?
So talk to her emotion
And go afar of the talk
Touch the heart
Talk to heart
Be connected or
It will bump
Appreciate the love
Don’t be tough
May the silk
raze
like blade
with flame

Be tactful
with love
Just be compassionate
In love
With care
And it will turn other turn
So sweet
Don’t be goof
Pick the raisin
Of the heart
Pick the love

Raisins of heart
To whom?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/30/2013 1:00:00 AM
A sweet poetic advice to men! Very finely penned indeed. Kudos. Pls review my latest poem.
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