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Raising Apples

apple falls near tree -- children reflect their parents values and morals

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/31/2019 9:47:00 AM

Carolyn, Very nice Senryu. I enjoy all the little apples..and wonderfully thankful for the journey. -Richard

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/30/2011 10:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your numero uno win Carolyn! This little poem is packed full of what some parents really don't want to see! :) . Thinking bout you relaxing on the waves. Hope you're having a great vacation.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2011 11:10:00 PM

I had really liked this the first time, CArolyn. GREAT win for a Great poem!

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 5/29/2011 5:55:00 AM

A worthy first placement for sure. You go, Caroline!!! :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/28/2011 11:38:00 PM

goody cheers for the top win, carols! enjoy tour fishing expedition!! :) huggs

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/28/2011 8:26:00 PM

LNC..congrats on your 1st with this wonderful apple poem..BG

Joseph Osita

Date: 5/28/2011 3:35:00 PM

Carolyn,congrats on your first place win!

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 5/28/2011 12:57:00 PM

Terrific Senryu Carolyn and congrats on your no.1 win.Thank you so much for the very nice congrats on my win.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 5/28/2011 12:49:00 PM

congrats carolyn on your 1st place win in the contest (very true words!) :-)

Andrew Crisci

Date: 5/28/2011 11:06:00 AM

Hi, Carolyn. I hope you are doing fine. I am happy to see your poem win first place in Carol Brown's contest. It's true what you state in your Senryu..." children reflect their parents values and morals. " It was a well-deserved win. Have a Happy Memorial Day with your loved ones. Hugs, Andrew.

Jack Horne

Date: 5/28/2011 10:50:00 AM

Wow, another number one - how's that to come home to? Many congratulations on all your wins, Carolyn : )

Kash Poet

Date: 5/28/2011 10:26:00 AM

A wonderful Senryu.Congrats Carolyn on your 1st place win....

Gautami Phookan

Date: 5/28/2011 9:39:00 AM

Carolyn, this is a rare one. a perfectly done senryu. Many Congratulations on your 1st place win...love, gautami

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/28/2011 8:26:00 AM

Cngratulations on your first place win in the contest, Carolyn

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/28/2011 8:13:00 AM

Great title with a great message too. Great win for you.....altho u don't even know u won yet bc u are on a delightful fishing trip and we are NOT! ha ha. Gwendolen

John Freeman

Date: 5/28/2011 6:36:00 AM

Great idea, Carolyn, Congratulations on your honored first place. Agape, Moses

Judy Konos

Date: 5/28/2011 6:22:00 AM

Congratulations....

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 5/28/2011 5:51:00 AM

congratulations on your big win...you're really great! two thumbs up! ----junjun

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/28/2011 5:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in my contest Carolyn. I thank you so much for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/24/2011 8:42:00 PM

carolyn, I was given a really hard challenge by Deb. I want to do that card one. I fear I can't do Deb's OR yours. Otherwise give up comments here at Soup to work only on poetry. haha. And I am too obsessed for that! Sorry I can't think what to say about that big fish!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/22/2011 1:38:00 PM

First there was Newton's Law of relativity and now there is Carolyn's Law of Relatives! You should rename this one. Love it love it love it!!! Carol it is.....thanks, Carolyn. Gwendolen

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 5/22/2011 1:43:00 PM

Love your sense of humor, Gwendolen!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2011 12:54:00 AM

AhA! a thinking man's (or woman's) senryu! VEry cool

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/21/2011 2:34:00 PM

pleased to read this good piece Carolyn.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/21/2011 2:58:00 AM

so true, Carolyn! It just starts at home....but haha your title actually made me think of apple pie? oh shucks I am in such a food mood! & somehow I think you can never be an elephant even with all the food ;) see you around & hugs :)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/20/2011 4:24:00 PM

How about a * for this!!!! I love it .... a winner as it should be.... been a crazy wekk and will catch up on what I missed over the next few days.... thanks for your comment... "Tme To Forget " is about a ride I took today for work... love Michael