Raising Apples

Carolyn, Very nice Senryu. I enjoy all the little apples..and wonderfully thankful for the journey. -Richard

Congratulations on your numero uno win Carolyn! This little poem is packed full of what some parents really don't want to see! :) . Thinking bout you relaxing on the waves. Hope you're having a great vacation.

I had really liked this the first time, CArolyn. GREAT win for a Great poem!

A worthy first placement for sure. You go, Caroline!!! :)

goody cheers for the top win, carols! enjoy tour fishing expedition!! :) huggs

LNC..congrats on your 1st with this wonderful apple poem..BG

Carolyn,congrats on your first place win!

Terrific Senryu Carolyn and congrats on your no.1 win.Thank you so much for the very nice congrats on my win.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

congrats carolyn on your 1st place win in the contest (very true words!) :-)

Hi, Carolyn. I hope you are doing fine. I am happy to see your poem win first place in Carol Brown's contest. It's true what you state in your Senryu..." children reflect their parents values and morals. " It was a well-deserved win. Have a Happy Memorial Day with your loved ones. Hugs, Andrew.

Wow, another number one - how's that to come home to? Many congratulations on all your wins, Carolyn : )

A wonderful Senryu.Congrats Carolyn on your 1st place win....

Carolyn, this is a rare one. a perfectly done senryu. Many Congratulations on your 1st place win...love, gautami

Cngratulations on your first place win in the contest, Carolyn

Great title with a great message too. Great win for you.....altho u don't even know u won yet bc u are on a delightful fishing trip and we are NOT! ha ha. Gwendolen

Great idea, Carolyn, Congratulations on your honored first place. Agape, Moses

Congratulations....

congratulations on your big win...you're really great! two thumbs up! ----junjun

Congratulations on your placement in my contest Carolyn. I thank you so much for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

carolyn, I was given a really hard challenge by Deb. I want to do that card one. I fear I can't do Deb's OR yours. Otherwise give up comments here at Soup to work only on poetry. haha. And I am too obsessed for that! Sorry I can't think what to say about that big fish!

First there was Newton's Law of relativity and now there is Carolyn's Law of Relatives! You should rename this one. Love it love it love it!!! Carol it is.....thanks, Carolyn. Gwendolen

AhA! a thinking man's (or woman's) senryu! VEry cool

pleased to read this good piece Carolyn.

so true, Carolyn! It just starts at home....but haha your title actually made me think of apple pie? oh shucks I am in such a food mood! & somehow I think you can never be an elephant even with all the food ;) see you around & hugs :)

How about a * for this!!!! I love it .... a winner as it should be.... been a crazy wekk and will catch up on what I missed over the next few days.... thanks for your comment... "Tme To Forget " is about a ride I took today for work... love Michael