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Raise Your Glass

Radiant golden daffodils sway in the breeze In air pure and clear Fluffy white cotton ball clouds watch over A pastel coloured rainbow gradually appears Distant melody of a trickling brook A vibrant coloured butterfly flutters passed Chirping birds happily converse So to the splendour of nature ….please raise your glass!

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Shirley Hawkins

Date: 12/18/2023 6:53:00 PM

That was so eloquently expressed, Deb. I raise my 'GLASSES' to both you and nature. Take care, Old Duck XX

Deb M
Date: 12/19/2023 11:55:00 AM

You are the sweetest my lovely friend Shirley! Debx

David Fisher

Date: 12/18/2023 6:28:00 AM

Here, here, to your poem and message. I'll carry these thoughts to warm up the winter.

Deb M
Date: 12/19/2023 11:54:00 AM

Thanks so much David! Debx

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 12/15/2023 5:25:00 PM

A beautiful tribute to nature on a summer's day, Deb. I raise my glass to the splendor of nature, and another one to your wonderful talent, my friend.

Deb M
Date: 12/19/2023 11:54:00 AM

Thankyou Jerry! Debx

Mike Gentile

Date: 12/15/2023 4:05:00 AM

Deb your tribute to the nature is splendorous in its own right! Just a lovely read! happy Friday xxoo

Deb M
Date: 12/19/2023 11:53:00 AM

Thankyou Mike! Debx

Terry Flood

Date: 12/14/2023 4:42:00 PM

Metaphorically, I frequently do, Deb. I’ve been enthralled by nature for as long as I can recall. Thus, I raise my glass to she and you. A smashing descriptive write.

Deb M
Date: 12/16/2023 7:09:00 AM

Cheers my funny friend!! Debx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/14/2023 4:22:00 PM

Cheers! Here! Here! Nature is splendorous! I agree. have a great evening, Deb, hugs, Sara

Deb M
Date: 12/16/2023 7:10:00 AM

Cheers sweet Sara! Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/14/2023 12:38:00 PM

- A delightful spring poem ... which I enjoy on a cold and snowy winter evening, Deb ... cheers :) - hugs

Lin Lane

Date: 12/14/2023 10:19:00 AM

I'll drink to that, Deb! What are we drinking? Seriously, this is a well written poem that sends out positive vibes.

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/14/2023 9:54:00 AM

In complete harmony with you, Deb, I offer a heartfelt toast to the wonders of nature. Your evocative imagery captivates my senses, compelling me to raise a symbolic glass in tribute to the resplendence of the natural world.

Jay Narain

Date: 12/14/2023 9:20:00 AM

Salute! Love the poem.

Silent One

Date: 12/14/2023 8:23:00 AM

Love your imagery Deb and I raise a glass to nature also..

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/14/2023 6:56:00 AM

Oh my gosh, the beauty of this poetic piece made my heart skip a few beats because you've painted such gorgeous imageries here, dear beautiful Deb.. My heart is swirling in the magick of your pristine wordplay, flowery fragrances of lines and such captivating skills. "Radiant golden daffodils", "Fluffy white cotton ball clouds", "pastel coloured rainbow" So elegant! A fav :)

Ink Empress

Date: 12/14/2023 6:26:00 AM

Wow! This literally took my breath away dear deb, i am in awe captivated by the way you’ve painted imagery, absolutely gorgeous! So stunning especially the opening lines and also “ A vibrant coloured butterfly flutters passed Chirping birds happily converse “ i heard, and i saw, through your words. Sending you light always

Deb M
Date: 12/14/2023 6:53:00 AM

You my dear sweet Ink you are just too lovely to me! Your comments are so gracious and they humble me …..and encourage me no end!! Thankyou sweet Ink! Debx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/14/2023 5:16:00 AM

I'm with you Deb, cheers to nature Tom

Deb M
Date: 12/14/2023 5:21:00 AM

Cheers to nature right back at ya Tom!! Debx