Raise Your Fist

(23 April 2012)

When you're possessed by tears and fears
Open yourself of what world brings
‘Cause it would absorb the mist
Ignore all those deafening hiss
As your muse will give you a kiss
Chin up high and raise your fist

This is the quote that inspired me.
“Do not feel lonely. The entire universe is inside you.” By: Rumi

I agree of his quote. Universe is made to help human. We just need to embrace what's provided and believe that no one's made lonely.


Written by: Dinda Minardi 
For 'RUMI IN RIME COUEE' Contest
Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

Sits on 6th place (",)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/23/2012 2:13:00 AM
Nice one dear
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Date: 5/11/2012 8:33:00 PM
way to go in the contest, Dinda. I'm happy to finally see this poem of yours!!
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Date: 5/10/2012 7:20:00 PM
Congrats Dinda on your win!Loved it first time around.
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Date: 5/10/2012 3:59:00 PM
Good job..enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 5/10/2012 10:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Rumi In Rime Couee" contest Dinda. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/10/2012 7:31:00 AM
Dinda congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/10/2012 2:26:00 AM
you bring me joy, dinda.. sweet cheers for placing well in my contest!..:) huggs!
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Date: 4/30/2012 7:26:00 AM
Hello dear muse, I will take your wise advice and loosen up. My mind accepts your reasoning and now I have to do it! Very good advice:) All the best in the contest.
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Date: 4/25/2012 10:36:00 AM
Dinda, if only it was that easy.. i like that line chin up and raise your fist.. good luck in the contest... this was very inspiring..always..pd
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Date: 4/23/2012 11:12:00 AM
Very uplifting poem by you here Dinda.Enjoyed reading it.Best wishes.
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