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Rainy, Rainy Life Revised

RAINY RAINY LIFE revised Verse 1 Rainy, rainy life... Blowing cold winds ...even in my dreams, Colors gone, even evergreens... I think about the joy, I had with you Verse 2 Now grey dwells within my soul... Nothing exists to fill the hole, Seeds were planted ...but they cannot grow In sterile, barren and forgotten soil Chorus Daily I will pray... for strength to face, another day Tomorrow's a turning world away I can't think about it now... Your mem'rys forever burned in my mind... Unchanged with passing time Verse 3 Rainy, rainy life... pictures of the love we shared... Mem'rys of loved one's that cared My eyes see everything, but now I'm blind... Verse 4 Life's been to me so unkind People look and they stop and stare.... a homeless man , traveling to nowhere... Standing watching cars pass in the pouring rain. Chorus Daily I will pray... for strength to face, another day Tomorrow's a turning world away I can't think about it now... Your mem'rys forever burned in my mind... Unchanged with passing time Chorus Repeat and fade John Derek Hamilton September 10,2016 revised November 19,2021

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/29/2021 12:55:00 AM

You write these sad songs so well, John, those homeless people have their own sad stories to tell for sure, great lyric:)

John Hamilton
Date: 11/29/2021 5:10:00 PM

Thanks Jo for the kind visit and generous words, I do appreciate it.

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/23/2021 7:13:00 AM

Dear John, your gifted pen was dipped in a deep well of despair as the ink flows with a profound sense of sadness expressed with aching finesse. Your emotional imagery takes my breath away.. "Colors gone, even evergreens" - so potent with poignancy of the overwhelming grey within your soul.. and, "a homeless man , traveling to nowhere... Standing watching cars pass in the pouring rain" - such powerful imagery of loneliness, helplessness and of being left behind and left out of life. The unbearable sense of loss is viscerally felt in your compelling lyric, my friend. I hope your ok and back with us soon. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

John Hamilton
Date: 11/24/2021 7:49:00 PM

Thanks Susan for your generous comments, this was a fave of mine brought back and revised for a song, got my composer working on the music so things are looking up. I'm doing fine thanks for your concern, just not too inspired lately. Take care JD