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Rainy Night Spills

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When rainfall spills on crystal night, The damp brick halls and lamps' soft light Make me slip-slide though I’m alone Into the lanes of cobblestone, Allowing free movement on flight. How droplets tap while hours invite A prance, a waltz as splash grips tight This child-like play down to the bone When rainfall spills. How pewter cloudscape with its height Gushes thrills of romp which excite Hips’ wiggling sway ; an eve outshone By pleasure rare I call my own... Till moonglow blinks oh drenched in white When rainfall spills. Form R- Contest of Broken Wings Theme: Rainy 6/29/2017

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Funom Makama

Date: 7/19/2017 1:54:00 PM

You just unzipped the covers of my mind to the unprecedented worship of your adorable lines with a powerful choice of words that can't just be ignored. Showers of your wisdom is well palpated in this page and the only thing I can say is a big WELL DONE! Can't wait to have more of your mental command flowing through my reading mind.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2017 4:19:00 PM

Awesome write, Nette, and using one of my favorite forms, the rondeau. You really livened up the theme of rain. Congrats in the contest.

Joseph May

Date: 7/16/2017 2:19:00 PM

Congrats on your win Nette

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 7/16/2017 2:08:00 AM

'Into the lanes of cobblestone, that is a fantastic metaphor. Congratulations, Kai

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/3/2017 1:31:00 AM

I love this one, Nette and that picture is just so apt for your beautiful dancing rondeau:)

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/29/2017 9:04:00 PM

A beautiful verse in the rain...I love it when it rains...and to read or write at the same time...or cry lol...god bless...^WW^

Eve Roper

Date: 6/29/2017 8:47:00 PM

this is amazing, Nette, a winning write ~*

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/29/2017 2:46:00 PM

This makes someone feels like dancing in the rain dear, Nette! Excellently written my friend. Hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/29/2017 5:05:00 AM

- It sounds like a completely different rain than we have in Norway :))) - Beautiful written - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 6/28/2017 8:16:00 PM

the exhilaration, the dance, the rain, all felt in this poetic verse filled with joy

Joseph May

Date: 6/28/2017 7:40:00 PM

Your poem dances with drizzling delight...

Akkina Downing

Date: 6/28/2017 7:31:00 PM

This remind me of when I was a kid. Running about under the rain and making splash in the puddles. Lol! So fun and beautiful, Miss nette :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/28/2017 6:46:00 PM

This poem is simply fun:) A romp in the rain never sounded more beautiful, nette:) I love romping in the rain. lol

Jan Allison

Date: 6/28/2017 5:32:00 PM

your words are dancing off the page Nette Its a shame you cant call it rain dance lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 6/28/2017 5:00:00 PM

Such a beautiful poetic offering Nette. Absolutely wonderful. Best wishes in the contest

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/28/2017 4:46:00 PM

This is so nice to read Nette :) Good luck in the contest :)