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Rainy Morning

Rain upon my window An early morning treat Water pooling by the door Then running down the street Magpie sitting in the tree Looking wet and cold Wishing for a juicy worm In his beak to hold Children running to and fro splashing in a puddle Laughing shouting singing songs Then joining in a huddle Kitty cat in a window across the muddy road Watching yellow raincoats From her safe abode

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Date: 9/19/2016 10:14:00 AM
You have painted a beautiful scene that satisfies one's senses. Can almost hear the laughter; see, smell, and touch the rain. Magpies, those annoyingly loud 5:00 AM alarm clocks. A spot of rain won't do him any harm.:) Enjoyed arriving here, on this rainy day. Thanks for sharing, Shane!! Best wishes. Love, your friend, Mikki
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Date: 9/18/2016 5:27:00 PM
Very nice poem on rain. I have also written a poem on rain just few hour before. U may visit, if u like. U penned very well here. Very simple &deep write. Enjoyed.........// hugs// Manmath.....
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Date: 8/12/2016 7:56:00 PM
I really like this poem and I like rain. It's been "raining cats and dogs" here in Louiaiana!
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Shane Cooper
Date: 8/13/2016 1:23:00 PM
Hi Carole, I to like the rain. I must admit though to a preference of being a spectator rather than one having to stand in it. Take care and thank you for the visits and kind words
Date: 7/21/2016 6:16:00 PM
Hi! I'm new here and just read your poem, "Rainy Morning", and just wanted to say that I like your style of writing: simple and easy to understand, the kind of poetry I like! Carole
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Date: 7/6/2016 8:44:00 PM
so innocent and fun, loved it shane ;) hugs x
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Shane Cooper
Date: 8/13/2016 1:27:00 PM
Hi Cas, I remember making matchbox boats when I was a child and floating them down gutters filled with running water after a rain storm. Funny how some images stay with you. Thanks for the visit and I am glad you liked the poem
Date: 6/27/2016 3:25:00 PM
A sweet poem, Shane. I liked the imagery you portrayed.
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Date: 6/20/2016 7:17:00 AM
Rain is on my mind too - so much for summer we got drenched yesterday - lovely to see you writing again Shane:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/19/2016 11:48:00 PM
great write, a 7 here
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