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Rainy Monday Morn

i hear the pulse
this somber day
beat across the sky
its downcast eyes
dropping tears
against my weary soul
within its lies
a sunrise
unseen
through sullen eyes

rainfree verse

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Bobby May

September 9, 2019 at 10:47 AM

Well written my friend!! Very touching to a heartfelt rainy day but sunshine will come your way! GOOD Job!!

Sandra Adams

September 9, 2019 at 11:33 AM

Thank you Bobby...sun is shining today on and off the site :) hugs

Elizabeth Kinch

September 3, 2019 at 3:19 AM

Bring on that sunrise! The rain is making me sad at the moment as I'm on holiday!

Sandra Adams

September 9, 2019 at 11:31 AM

Thank you Elizabeth...the sun is shining today :) hugs

Gershon Wolf

September 2, 2019 at 8:02 PM

This one resonates so, especially those 'downcast eyes dropping tears...' Wonderfully penned, Sandy! :) gw (Soup mail, please).

Sandra Adams

September 9, 2019 at 11:31 AM

Thank you my friend...one of those quick musings :) hugs

Paul Callus

September 2, 2019 at 3:44 PM

Monday...and a rainy one at that, comes along with a feeling of sadness. Don't worry...by the weekend all will be fine again:) ~ Regards // paul

Sandra Adams

September 2, 2019 at 3:50 PM

every rainy monday i hear the carpenters singing "rainy days and mondays always get me down" in my head....i am off today but wanted to do things outside, the rain sort of halted my plans, every time it stops it comes back again....:) Thank you for your visit and comment!

Chris Green

September 2, 2019 at 3:21 PM

Nicely done. Though another sad poem it seems, rain is nice every once in a while. Your depiction of the day brings a mournful feeling, a gray and blue kind of feeling which just speaks of your talent to paint whatever you choose in words that bring the reader into the scene.

Sandra Adams

September 2, 2019 at 3:25 PM

Thank you...i removed the following 2 stanzas i penned within this one because it started to get into greater depths of sadness...i thought this one could stand alone.... :) hugs

Gordon Mcconnell

September 2, 2019 at 3:19 PM

superb rainy piece Sandra, rain does tend to have poetic effect upon us at times, well it does me! Have a great day, Gordon

Sandra Adams

September 2, 2019 at 3:22 PM

Thank you Gordon...rain can be as inspiring as the sun... got to make sunshine somehow when the sky cries :) hugs

Vijay Pandit

September 2, 2019 at 3:02 PM

Simply beautiful.

Sandra Adams

September 2, 2019 at 3:05 PM

thanks my friend...it's been raining all day, it started as thunder and every time it starts to look like it's clearing the sky cries again....:) hugs

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