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She runs to gain pace alongside her Great Dane. Excitement flares to the sounds of the rain. Through puddles and grass, in vain slipping, sliding, endless grass and mud stains. A little angel full of sassy curls color of grain, runs like the wind blows, chasing clear blue skies and mobile rainbows.
7/6/2017 For the Contest: 'Form R' Sponsored By: Broken Wings

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Date: 8/30/2017 10:21:00 PM
Great childhood/nostalgia feel to it.
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Date: 7/18/2017 2:21:00 AM
Congrats Eve. I always admire your poem. Love
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Date: 7/17/2017 4:25:00 PM
short and sweet, just how I love my rhymes to be. Love THIS, Eve!! Congrats
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Date: 7/7/2017 4:53:00 AM
:) Loved that second line in particular. I love the rain and this resonates with me. Good luck in the contest, dear.
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Date: 7/6/2017 7:28:00 PM
It's more fun barefooted and in shorts:) Very cute, Mrs Eve:)
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Date: 7/6/2017 6:01:00 PM
aww what a cute poem Eve i love the imagery and the pic:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/6/2017 4:50:00 PM
This is so very sweet Eve. What a nicely written poem :)
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