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Rainy Excitement Flares

She runs to gain pace alongside her Great Dane. Excitement flares to the sounds of the rain. Through puddles and grass, in vain slipping, sliding, endless grass and mud stains. A little angel full of sassy curls color of grain, runs like the wind blows, chasing clear blue skies and mobile rainbows.
7/6/2017 For the Contest: 'Form R' Sponsored By: Broken Wings
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Welch Avatar
August 30, 2017 at 10:21 PM
Great childhood/nostalgia feel to it.
Dutta Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 2:21 AM
Congrats Eve. I always admire your poem. Love
Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 4:25 PM
short and sweet, just how I love my rhymes to be. Love THIS, Eve!! Congrats
Manassian Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 4:53 AM
:) Loved that second line in particular. I love the rain and this resonates with me. Good luck in the contest, dear.
Turner Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 7:28 PM
It's more fun barefooted and in shorts:) Very cute, Mrs Eve:)
Allison Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 6:01 PM
aww what a cute poem Eve i love the imagery and the pic:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Sands Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 4:50 PM
This is so very sweet Eve. What a nicely written poem :)
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