Rainy Daze

Rainy Daze

sitting quietly I watch as the
raindrops reassemble in the
puddle

schoolchildren at recess
awaiting the forming of lines
holding raindrop hands

humming sweetly on the
steaming pavement
erasing schoolyard blacktop

shape changing the oily
rainbow of the bus stop
bottle caps setting sail

in surging gutter streams
umbrellas lifting on a
cloudy breeze.

raindrops, skydivers from
a distant sea, teasing the
garden locked landlubber’s

with tales of travel and
of history, of gardens
drenched in mystery

sitting in my rainy daze
sharing cool moist now
with then


John G. Lawless
9/10/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meier-Hans Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 11:10 AM
You have displayed a wonderful imaginative poem. Congratulations on your win.
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 8:38 AM
- I enjoy reading your great and well written poem, John ! - Congratulations on your 3rd place in the contest! - Happy weekend :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Lawless Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 8:54 AM
Thank you Anne Lise.
Mehta Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 6:25 AM
Creative and interesting poem, John, congrats on the win
Lawless Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 8:54 AM
Thanks Dr. Mehta for your support
Allison Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 4:50 AM
very expressive with lovely imagery. many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
Lawless Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 8:53 AM
Thanks Jan I've always tended to go play in the rain, not hide from it.
Gasun Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 3:21 AM
Congratulations my dear poet friend. I thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful write! Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support. Hugs and cheers! Love lots, Leonora
Lawless Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 8:52 AM
Thanks for stopping by always nice to hear from you.
Dietrich Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 10:36 PM
john, this is very creative the way you present your small verses. Each event is like a drop of rain!
Lawless Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 10:58 PM
Growing up in the city, hot dog day afternoons, sudden showers, and misty melancholy. Thanks Andrea
Trichet Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 4:07 AM
Nice work John, I like its ebb n flow...GL
Lawless Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 10:57 PM
thanks Mark for stopping by and reading.
Mohn Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 8:33 PM
Terrific John
Lawless Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 10:55 PM
Thank you David.
Halliday Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 6:10 PM
Very well done; great imagery.
Lawless Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 10:55 PM
Thanks Mark for checking in.
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