Rainy Days

It's Raining.
Come on my beautiful lady its spring showers 
let us fly with the rain knowing how much you 
love the raining season,living next to the ocean,
my promenade on the sand hand in hand with 
the rain always allows me to regain my strength,
it gives me the power to share my deep feelings 
& emotions.
It hit me tonight to run quickly after the rain,
and that is only the beginning.

Oh! let it rain again & again,let the thunder start 
singing a song with the strong rain drops vibrating 
like the echo of music from afar. 

Walking alone by the ocean I felt heavy drops 
of rain flowing down my cheeks mingling with 
my tears whispering,its me your friend the rain 
again,I haven't much time,I am passing by to 
listen to your heart beat & wash away your 
fears to run under your feet warm them 
with a hug,and hear me convey a message 
to your thoughts that i love you.
 
& decided to carry you away out West,deliver you 
to pass sometime with your children,hug them,
love them,talk to them,share with them,sit with 
them until I come back to fly you home again.

Here I am back from this memorable panoramic 
journey while piloted by the pouring rain,
love the rain,an eternal friend as long as I live.
                          
    Therese Bacha                                                                                              
 
  21/5/2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Meier-Hans Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 11:24 AM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem Theresa.
Bacha Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 11:33 AM
Hi Brenda, it is so sweet of you to pass by to review my poem. Thank you so so much. Have a great weekend. Hugs Terry xoxo
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 8:45 AM
- I enjoy reading your lovely and well written poem, Therese ! - Congratulations on your 4rd place in the contest! - Happy weekend :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Bacha Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 8:51 AM
Hello sweet Anne, always the faithful friend, thank you so much for passing by. I have been absent for a while, hopefully gradually I will come back. Have a great weekend. Hugs Terry xoxoox
Gasun Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 7:59 AM
Congratulations my dear poet friend Therese. I thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful write. Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support. Hugs and cheers! Love lots, Leonora
Bacha Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 8:54 AM
Hello Leonora, its so nice of you to pass by and leave that heartfelt review about my poem. I am so happy for this win, a beautiful surprise. Thank you. Hugs Terry xoxo
Mehta Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 6:36 AM
well penned poem, Theresa, congrats on the win
Bacha Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 8:52 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram, I do appreciate your kindness to pass by and review my poem. Bless you Terry xx
Allison Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 4:55 AM
Absolutely beautiful! many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
Bacha Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 8:49 AM
Thank you so much for your sharing review. I am so happy, as I was not expected to win. So nice of you to pass by. Have a great weekend. Hugs Terry
Duncan Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 1:37 PM
captivating picture you write here Terry ,and you won with it as well ;} you have a blessed day ;} xxx
Bacha Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 2:08 PM
Thank you so much Debbie, hope you are fine, have a wonderful day. Love Terry xo
Carrillo Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 6:03 AM
Sorry The contest already happened. glad that you won..... Lucy
Bacha Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 9:24 AM
Oh what a pity, maybe next time. Hope you will feel better. Love Terry xoxoxo
Carrillo Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 6:01 AM
Terry; You have a beauty of a poem here.I love the April showers and rain anytime. we had not been getting much rain here, but today we are going to have Stormy Weather. I have to check this contest have a great day...... Lucy
Bacha Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 9:23 AM
Hi Lucy, thank you so much for your encouraging comments. Love Terry xoxoxo
Jones Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 6:32 PM
I loved the mingling with my tears...congratulations.. Donna
Bacha Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 6:55 PM
I love your comments, they are a bundle of depth, and lovely. Thank you so much. Love Terry xoxo
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April 17, 2013 at 8:38 AM
Good morning Terry, Congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Spring Shower" contest. Nothing lovelier than the fresh felling of spring approaching. *Always & Forever~LINDA
Bacha Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 11:17 AM
Good morning to you, my wonderful visiter, thank you PD, Thank you so much , will see you soon. Love Terry xoxoxo
May Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 7:40 AM
congrats on your win Terry
Bacha Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 11:18 AM
Thank you so much Joseph for passing by. Love Terry xoxo
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April 16, 2013 at 10:12 PM
Ahhh Love the rain and Absolutely loved your poem. You had my heart strings directing them to your trip out west. Beautiful write Terry, think I'll take a walk in the next rainfall : ) (((Hugs)))
Bacha Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 10:41 PM
Hi Bernard, thank you so much, take a walk, and be happy. Love Terry xoxo Nice to see you my friend.
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April 14, 2013 at 7:55 PM
This is a tremendous, awesome write my friend! I am enthralled by the tenderness of this delightful poem! What a glorious and well written piece, Great Work!!
Bacha Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 8:20 PM
Thank you Russell, my good friend with nice very nice comments, thank you Russell, you are such a gentlemen. Love Terry xoxo
Bacha Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 8:18 PM
Thank you Russell, my good friend with nice very nice comments, thank you Russell, you are such a gentlemen. Love Terry xoxo
De Burca Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 12:47 PM
Simply beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
Bacha Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 1:11 PM
Thank you so much, so nice of you to pass by. Terry xoxo
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