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Rainy Day Silhouettes

Sleek blurred silhouettes
beneath colored umbrellas
shun falling silver.
On the path to golden sun
strangers all walk together.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Hind Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 8:26 AM
Gorgeous images and rhyme! Loved it.
Buehler Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 2:12 PM
Glad you liked it, Paige. Thank you. :)
Pandit Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 4:29 AM
Excellent images, Evelyn, as always: Sleek blurred silhouettes beneath colored umbrellas...
Buehler Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 2:11 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay. :)
Andresen Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 4:03 AM
- Lovely ... blurred silhouettes under the umbrella, Evelyn :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 2:10 PM
That's so nice to know, Anne-Lise. Thank you, my friend. :) hugs
Rolland Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 10:59 PM
i adore, you are really a good "painter", thanks a lot yann
Buehler Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 1:46 PM
Thank you so much. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 10:56 PM
Very picturesque.
Buehler Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 1:45 PM
Thank you very much. :)
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