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Rainy Day Beauty

Rainy Day Beauty  

Outside our bedroom window
the leaves dance in the rain
As if they’re waving to me,
my smile I can’t refrain

The day it may be gloomy,
but when I look I see
Such beauty here beside me,
now sleeping peacefully

And though the dawn is stormy
with clouded charcoal skies
My morning will be perfect when,
you open up your eyes

Good morning Soupers

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Paul Callus

Date: 1/4/2017 3:26:00 PM

Sweetly romantic; rainy mornings can be beautiful when you know that you can afford to linger in bed:) // paul

Chris Green
Date: 1/4/2017 4:29:00 PM

Thanks so very much Paul. I am happy you enjoyed this one.

Tim Smith

Date: 1/4/2017 11:05:00 AM

That's when you want to stay in bed all day.

Chris Green
Date: 1/4/2017 11:14:00 AM

Yeah, rain or shine. :) Thanks so much Tim.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/4/2017 8:56:00 AM

Good morning, Chris:) a lovely picture you paint with your 'rainbow' words:) when the heart is happy, all gloom disappears:)

Chris Green
Date: 1/4/2017 9:12:00 AM

Good morning Jo. Thank you for your kindness today.

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/4/2017 8:36:00 AM

It's been so long, I can't remember. Nice good morning poem, Chris:)

Chris Green
Date: 1/4/2017 9:11:00 AM

Thanks so very much Daniel.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/4/2017 8:35:00 AM

Such a cosy poem on a rainy day.Isn'i it lovely? :).

Chris Green
Date: 1/4/2017 9:11:00 AM

Thank you so much my sweet friend.

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 1/4/2017 7:43:00 AM

Another perfect morning at your house, and, another perfect poem!

Chris Green
Date: 1/4/2017 8:15:00 AM

Thanks so very much my friend for your kind thoughts this morning

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/4/2017 7:41:00 AM

Very nice Chris! I always feel like the leaves are 'waving' in the breeze :)

Chris Green
Date: 1/4/2017 8:15:00 AM

Thank you Heidi for always making me smile.

Paloma P

Date: 1/4/2017 7:22:00 AM

Oh, too much rain here lately, your poetry makes the sun shine Chris!

Chris Green
Date: 1/4/2017 8:14:00 AM

Thanks so much Paloma, I am happy to bring a little sun to your world.

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/4/2017 6:43:00 AM

Good Morning Chris, you made a rainy day look so romantic. I enjoyed how you caused the reader to see what you saw. It was like I was looking outside that window. I agree no matter how gloomy it is outside waking up next to the one you love is sweet sunshine ( the best morning ever). A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 1/4/2017 8:14:00 AM

Thank you Alexis, I am happy if this one brought a little sunshine to your rainy day. I hope you feel better soon.