Chris Green Poet Rhyme

Rainy Day Beauty

Rainy Day Beauty  

Outside our bedroom window
the leaves dance in the rain
As if they’re waving to me,
my smile I can’t refrain

The day it may be gloomy,
but when I look I see
Such beauty here beside me,
now sleeping peacefully

And though the dawn is stormy
with clouded charcoal skies
My morning will be perfect when,
you open up your eyes

Good morning Soupers

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Paul Callus January 4, 2017 at 3:26 PM Sweetly romantic; rainy mornings can be beautiful when you know that you can afford to linger in bed:) // paul Chris Green January 4, 2017 at 4:29 PM Thanks so very much Paul. I am happy you enjoyed this one.

Tim Smith January 4, 2017 at 11:05 AM That's when you want to stay in bed all day. Chris Green January 4, 2017 at 11:14 AM Yeah, rain or shine. :) Thanks so much Tim.

Joanna Daniel January 4, 2017 at 8:56 AM Good morning, Chris:) a lovely picture you paint with your 'rainbow' words:) when the heart is happy, all gloom disappears:) Chris Green January 4, 2017 at 9:12 AM Good morning Jo. Thank you for your kindness today.

Daniel Turner January 4, 2017 at 8:36 AM It's been so long, I can't remember. Nice good morning poem, Chris:) Chris Green January 4, 2017 at 9:11 AM Thanks so very much Daniel.

Charmaine Chircop January 4, 2017 at 8:35 AM Such a cosy poem on a rainy day.Isn'i it lovely? :). Chris Green January 4, 2017 at 9:11 AM Thank you so much my sweet friend.

Lim'Rik Flats January 4, 2017 at 7:43 AM Another perfect morning at your house, and, another perfect poem! Chris Green January 4, 2017 at 8:15 AM Thanks so very much my friend for your kind thoughts this morning

Heidi Sands January 4, 2017 at 7:41 AM Very nice Chris! I always feel like the leaves are 'waving' in the breeze :) Chris Green January 4, 2017 at 8:15 AM Thank you Heidi for always making me smile.

Paloma P January 4, 2017 at 7:22 AM Oh, too much rain here lately, your poetry makes the sun shine Chris! Chris Green January 4, 2017 at 8:14 AM Thanks so much Paloma, I am happy to bring a little sun to your world.

Alexis Y. January 4, 2017 at 6:43 AM Good Morning Chris, you made a rainy day look so romantic. I enjoyed how you caused the reader to see what you saw. It was like I was looking outside that window. I agree no matter how gloomy it is outside waking up next to the one you love is sweet sunshine ( the best morning ever). A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis Chris Green January 4, 2017 at 8:14 AM Thank you Alexis, I am happy if this one brought a little sunshine to your rainy day. I hope you feel better soon.

White Wolf January 4, 2017 at 6:14 AM Lovely poem, Chris! And good morning mate. Chris Green January 4, 2017 at 8:13 AM Good morning Rick. Thanks so much my friend.