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Rainy Day

Rainy Day

The melancholic, cold rain makes me sad.
In the days of loud silence,
rain always called on you.
Your way into my thoughts and tears.
*
Color of lead on the sky; everything is grey.
The blue is in your eyes only.
Come along and listen with me
to the drops dripping down the window.
Like once upon a time down to our curls,
while in love and smiling, 
we kissing each other under the clouds.
*
Your head is on my heart.
I am silently touched by your skin.
The gentle warmth of voice.
Your hands on my face heal everything.
*
Heavens Weltschmerz for all sad loves.
Maybe spring will bring something new.
New love and joy.
*
Piano music is somewhere in the distance.
A full circle day is approaching.
Announcement of the golden days in Marrakech.
With flower petals on the bed
and the view of the sunny oasis day.
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Gifford Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 6:20 AM
Hello Maximilian, an excellent write and a great read. Wishing you a fabulous weekend, fellow poet.
G. Wolf Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 5:39 AM
You are so kind, thank you. /~Max/
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 4, 2024 at 10:56 AM
Hello Maximilla, these sound like lovely memories. Enjoy your day my friend. create more poetry. my friend. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 11:24 AM
Hello max, You are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
G. Wolf Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 10:39 AM
Darlene, Very kind of you. Have a great day. /Max/
Kendrick Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 3:43 AM
Very emotive, expressive and descriptive work. I hope not a present moment in your life but one in the past that brought up a memory which you decided to write down to clear your thoughts about the event. I enjoyed reading those thoughts either way. Sara
G. Wolf Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 12:54 PM
Dear Sara, Thank you. Much appreciate for support. ~Max
Ashley Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 7:24 PM
Dear Maximilian, I was captivated by your imagery, both atmospheric and emotional. Your poem is gripping with intriguing use of language that commands the attention of one's senses, heart and imagination. Yearning and sadness is palpable. Simply amazing. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
G. Wolf Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 12:36 AM
Dear Susan, Thank you so much for kind words. Have a wonderful day! ~Max
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