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Rainy Day

The melancholic, cold rain makes me sad. In the days of loud silence, rain always called on you. Your way into my thoughts and tears. * Color of lead on the sky; everything is grey. The blue is in your eyes only. Come along and listen with me to the drops dripping down the window. Like once upon a time down to our curls, while in love and smiling, we kissing each other under the clouds. * Your head is on my heart. I am silently touched by your skin. The gentle warmth of voice. Your hands on my face heal everything. * Heavens Weltschmerz for all sad loves. Maybe spring will bring something new. New love and joy. * Piano music is somewhere in the distance. A full circle day is approaching. Announcement of the golden days in Marrakech. With flower petals on the bed and the view of the sunny oasis day. ---#---

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Date: 11/1/2021 3:43:00 AM
Very emotive, expressive and descriptive work. I hope not a present moment in your life but one in the past that brought up a memory which you decided to write down to clear your thoughts about the event. I enjoyed reading those thoughts either way. Sara
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Maximilian G. Wolf
Date: 11/2/2021 12:54:00 PM
Dear Sara, Thank you. Much appreciate for support. ~Max
Date: 10/24/2021 7:24:00 PM
Dear Maximilian, I was captivated by your imagery, both atmospheric and emotional. Your poem is gripping with intriguing use of language that commands the attention of one's senses, heart and imagination. Yearning and sadness is palpable. Simply amazing. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/25/2021 12:36:00 AM
Dear Susan, Thank you so much for kind words. Have a wonderful day! ~Max