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Rainy Day

Take me away, o rainy day as your gentle waters pass my way Sweetly kissed by foggy mist my troubled thoughts have fallen whist What soothing sound the droplets found as on my roof they dance around The nearness of the clouds above has left the mountains bathed in love Purples, pinks do cast their winks and woodlands thrive as Nature drinks O rainy day take me away upon your wings through skies of gray

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/23/2018 5:36:00 AM
Reads like a sweet song. Nicely done.
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Michael Wise
Date: 12/23/2018 7:10:00 AM
Thank u Valerie! Thanks for stopping by! :)
Date: 12/21/2018 9:40:00 PM
Your rhymes are so good, I think you might consider song-writing unless you are already doing it.
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Michael Wise
Date: 12/22/2018 5:58:00 AM
Not yet, but it's a thought! I have one poem that reads like a song, maybe I'll post it. Thank u!
Date: 12/20/2018 4:10:00 PM
I love when the rain takes me away, to another time, another place. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. :) Brandy
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Michael Wise
Date: 12/20/2018 4:18:00 PM
Thank u Brandy! I'm glad you took the trip with me! :)

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