Rainy Day

Take me away,
o rainy day
as your gentle waters
pass my way

Sweetly kissed
by foggy mist
my troubled thoughts
have fallen whist

What soothing sound
the droplets found
as on my roof
they dance around

The nearness of
the clouds above
has left the mountains
bathed in love

Purples, pinks
do cast their winks
and woodlands thrive
as Nature drinks

O rainy day
take me away
upon your wings
through skies of gray
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Staton Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 5:36 AM
Reads like a sweet song. Nicely done.
Wise Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 7:10 AM
Thank u Valerie! Thanks for stopping by! :)
Krutsinger Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 9:40 PM
Your rhymes are so good, I think you might consider song-writing unless you are already doing it.
Wise Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 5:58 AM
Not yet, but it's a thought! I have one poem that reads like a song, maybe I'll post it. Thank u!
Nicole Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 4:10 PM
I love when the rain takes me away, to another time, another place. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. :) Brandy
Wise Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 4:18 PM
Thank u Brandy! I'm glad you took the trip with me! :)
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