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Raining Tears

My true loves asleep Beneath a blanket of clouds And I but his lullaby Dancing a lament Raining tears of sorrows grief Lightly I float by your grave Picture #1 7-3-2019 Fives and Sevens Contest 4th Place win Sponsor: Joseph May

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/22/2019 12:55:00 PM

Hauntingly beautiful and well written dear Jeanne, congrats on your win xo

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/22/2019 3:59:00 PM

Hi PD...gracias muchas!

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/22/2019 6:21:00 AM

Well written Jeanne! Congratulations for your win :)

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/22/2019 9:22:00 AM

Thanks so much.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/22/2019 5:50:00 AM

- A deeply moving poem, Jeanne - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/22/2019 9:23:00 AM

Hi SS...thanks so much for your comment. oxox

Joseph May

Date: 7/21/2019 6:00:00 PM

A poignant write Jeanne..Very nicely penned Congrats on your win

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/22/2019 9:24:00 AM

Thanks for the opportunity to put a poem into one of your contests!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/21/2019 5:18:00 PM

This is a very lovely entry Jeanne. Congratulations on your wonderful win! xxoo : )

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/22/2019 9:25:00 AM

Thank you Connie for your nice comments!

Sandra Adams

Date: 7/5/2019 3:22:00 PM

such a bittersweet poem, the images drew me in and then hit me with the sad end..nicely penned :) hugs

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/7/2019 10:56:00 PM

Hi Sandra. Thank you for your wonderful comments.

Archie Wilson

Date: 7/5/2019 8:08:00 AM

Very interesting and compelling view of grief, thank you.

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/7/2019 11:00:00 PM

The picture brought back my feelings of how I felt when my boyfriend died at sea in an accident. I'm glad it made you think of grief in a new way. Thanks for reading my poetry.

Sand Blown

Date: 7/4/2019 5:26:00 PM

well writ...reminds me of the famous movie line "...lost like...tears in the rain"....beautiful

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/4/2019 10:04:00 PM

Thanks SandBlown.... I'm not sure I know that movie but I love tears in the rain.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/4/2019 5:16:00 PM

Ooooh! Wasn't expecting that: Poignantly penned, Jeanne! G.L. in the contest. ~ gw

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/4/2019 10:15:00 PM

Thank you so much Gershon. The ending surprised me too. I love the magic of writing and how it becomes what it must by what you feel.

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/4/2019 3:47:00 PM

You said it well... love the message behind it...