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Raining Sparkler Joy

raining sparkler joy white hot potassium glow..... small hands know no fear © Jul 01 2010 For Deborah’s “fireworks” contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/6/2010 8:23:00 AM

Congratulations Charles on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Fireworks". Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/6/2010 1:22:00 AM

Congrats Charles with this one-- that 2nd line of yours was pretty unique! :) --nikko :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/5/2010 1:35:00 PM

Great win, Charles. I liked it mucho. LUv, Andrea

Elaine George

Date: 7/5/2010 8:53:00 AM

Lovely Haiku, Charles. Conratulations on your well deserved win. Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/4/2010 6:30:00 PM

Congrats Charles on your winning Haiku in the Fireworks contest with this remarkable write and win.. enjoy as u celebrate the 4th.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA...

Date: 7/4/2010 4:20:00 PM

You have me smiling with this fun way to celebrate the holiday. Brings back fond memories for me. Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing! Karen

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/1/2010 6:24:00 AM

Dear friend you have a good idea! See line 1...it should not be a sentence...other 2 lines very haiku! tweak tweak abit! Light 7 Love

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/1/2010 3:55:00 AM

A nice picture you have presented of the fireworks, Charles