Raining Sparkler Joy

raining sparkler joy

	white hot potassium glow.....

		small hands know no fear

© Jul 01 2010 For Deborah’s “fireworks” contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 8:23 AM
Congratulations Charles on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Fireworks". Love, Carol
K. Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 1:22 AM
Congrats Charles with this one-- that 2nd line of yours was pretty unique! :) --nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 1:35 PM
Great win, Charles. I liked it mucho. LUv, Andrea
George   Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 8:53 AM
Lovely Haiku, Charles. Conratulations on your well deserved win. Lainie
Sweetheart Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 6:30 PM
Congrats Charles on your winning Haiku in the Fireworks contest with this remarkable write and win.. enjoy as u celebrate the 4th.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA...
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July 4, 2010 at 4:20 PM
You have me smiling with this fun way to celebrate the holiday. Brings back fond memories for me. Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing! Karen
Guzzi Avatar
July 1, 2010 at 6:24 AM
Dear friend you have a good idea! See line 1...it should not be a sentence...other 2 lines very haiku! tweak tweak abit! Light 7 Love
Mehta Avatar
July 1, 2010 at 3:55 AM
A nice picture you have presented of the fireworks, Charles
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