Michael J. Falotico Poet Tetractys

Raining Smiles

by Michael Faloticio
                                                               Rain 
                                                          pours from
                                                         the Heavens 
                                                     down and beyond
                                   to the sounds of my cries not heard or felt..
                                    But as the clouds are pushed away and fly
                                                     the warmth begins
                                                          and a smile
                                                             reaches
                                                                 me..

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 19, 2011 at 6:54 PM smiling back at u luv.. excellent as I previously commented.. a treasured piece to cherish and your J.G. does.. absolutely ..like Rocky always says ..oh..

Nette Onclaud August 16, 2011 at 5:15 PM michael, lovely phrasing for an offering that calms the day.. a beauty! :) huggs!

Carol Sunshine Brown August 16, 2011 at 10:40 AM I am so thrilled by the poetry I am reading this morning. Looks like everyone has found a pipeline to inspiration. This is wonderful and I am so happy your poetry is right here in this mix Michael. Thank you so much for sharing. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels August 16, 2011 at 7:50 AM A beautiful uplifting write Michael, quite enjoyed by me this afternoon :) love W

Carolyn Devonshire August 16, 2011 at 4:09 AM Thank you for providing an uplifting poem that may begin with rain and cries, but ends with smiles, Michael. I have read so many sad poems this morning that this is going to my favorites for the peace it brought to me. Bless you, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich August 16, 2011 at 12:38 AM I love how this comes out on the other side with warmth and a smile! Lovely, Michael.

Cory Long August 15, 2011 at 5:50 PM this is awesome I love the way rain makes you feel. This was a wonderful poem.. have a wonderful night cory Michael J. Falotico August 15, 2011 at 6:12 PM Thank you Cory... means alot to me

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 15, 2011 at 5:41 PM lines that move emotions Michael luv... warmth always comes after the tragic sounds of life unfold in our path... the sun takes it all away.. such lovely poetry ...soulful and deep.. yes your Jersey Girl poured out a part of her life in The Precipice and feel like I am standing on one at the moment luv... so decision making time this month... J.G. in emotional mode .. as your lines endure in my heart forever and always my luv.. yes.. remember I did send u some lines a while ago but new ones OK.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 15, 2011 at 5:41 PM send me some lines Michael and we can do a collab this week before I leave for vaca..luv.

Michael J. Falotico August 15, 2011 at 5:09 PM After 3 days of rain, not much else to write about lol..... enjoy Soup Family