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Raining On My Insanity

You faded too soon Gone to the moon A holiday for you Now what am I to do Gone to the moon Lost without you Now what am I to do A frosted complexion Lost without you A holiday for you A frosted complexion You faded too soon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/17/2011 2:40:00 PM
Emma, This person certainly made an impact on your life. Your poem reflects your mood with this great line-a frosted complexion. I am around much death in my profession and "frosted" is a great adjective for the shock and dismay felt. Blessings. Gwendolen
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Date: 3/17/2011 1:51:00 PM
Hi Emma. I liked this but is it some new fangled pantoum? it's not one that i'm familiar with. However, it's a good write and thank you for sharing.
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Date: 3/17/2011 1:49:00 PM
A sad deep.poem Emma.. enjoyed... have a nice day..p.d.
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