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Rose, Red, Drip, Rain, Leaf, Wet

Raining On My Garden

So glad, so happy, enthralled to have a job! Chortling as I choke back words.  The verse part of my garden absurdly lacking. But so thrilled, tickled, absolutely agog.

bouquet of part-time
bloomed into three full days -
my garden suffers

3/20/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 8:18 AM
Great irony Kim. 'absurdly lacking' That's so well put
Rodrigues Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 8:51 AM
Thank you, Allen!
Krutsinger Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 3:48 AM
What a lovely haibun in time for spring, Kim. I can picture you out there, and it makes me feel jealous as it will probably be the middle of May before I dare think "no more frost" in Kansas.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 7:34 AM
Thank you, my friend!
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