Raining On My Garden

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Rose, Red, Drip, Rain, Leaf, Wet

So glad, so happy, enthralled to have a job! Chortling as I choke back words. The verse part of my garden absurdly lacking. But so thrilled, tickled, absolutely agog. bouquet of part-time bloomed into three full days - my garden suffers 3/20/2019

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Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 4/13/2019 12:44:00 PM

Well written, great association. A good one, Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2019 1:47:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra!

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 3/21/2019 8:18:00 AM

Great irony Kim. 'absurdly lacking' That's so well put

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/21/2019 8:51:00 AM

Thank you, Allen!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/21/2019 3:48:00 AM

What a lovely haibun in time for spring, Kim. I can picture you out there, and it makes me feel jealous as it will probably be the middle of May before I dare think "no more frost" in Kansas.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/21/2019 7:34:00 AM

Thank you, my friend!