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Raining Love- Tb

 when true love rains, 
rose moon reigns~heart 
thrums strains in stars

deepdreamemotionslovethan-bauk

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Terry Miller

Date: 11/20/2023 8:11:00 AM

Wonderful, a fine winner indeed

Hilo Poet

Date: 11/17/2023 8:29:00 PM

Eloquently done, Ink Empress. A natural quality emanates a wispy decency of delight. This is a beautiful phrase that evokes a sense of wonder and joy. It’s poetic and has a whimsical quality to it. Much enjoyed, my friend. Aloha, William

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/17/2023 8:27:00 PM

Colorful! Congratulations!

Charles Messina

Date: 11/17/2023 4:49:00 AM

So beautiful, Ink. Just love this :) Congratulations on your win! Hugs

Ink Empress
Date: 11/17/2023 10:36:00 AM

Thank u so much charles u are so generous and kind

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2023 1:14:00 PM

I like how well this one flows. I am reading ones that are stilted, but you did it perfectly.

Ink Empress
Date: 11/7/2023 1:15:00 AM

Ah that means alot , it was a bit tricky at first i had to do few of these and chose this one to enter for the contest. Thank u so much. Ah i saw ur ninette contest, i was just thinking yesterday its been a while since iv last written a ninette. Cant wait to try again. Sending you light always

Paige Hind

Date: 11/6/2023 9:40:00 AM

Very delicate and lovely, Ink. Always enjoy!

Ink Empress
Date: 11/6/2023 9:46:00 AM

Awwn thank you always kind soul

Eve Roper

Date: 11/6/2023 7:03:00 AM

Lovely write, so romantic with emotion, Ink. Good luck in the contest. Enjoyed reading my friend. Thank you for my win in your contest. Many blessings my friend

Ink Empress
Date: 11/6/2023 9:47:00 AM

Thank you so very much, means alot coming from a talented soul like you. Truly

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/6/2023 5:25:00 AM

Your interpretation of the Than-Bauk is both exceptional and awe-inspiring. Despite its brevity, your poem encapsulates profound emotions. The utilization of imagery is impeccable, resulting in an uplifting piece. Your skillful execution, particularly in the wordplay of 'rains/reigns,' is truly commendable. BOL with the contest.

Ink Empress
Date: 11/6/2023 9:48:00 AM

Dear Sotto i truly appreciate your support always. Just found this form fun to do, cant wait to read yours. Thank you so much

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/6/2023 5:20:00 AM

when true love rains, rose moon reigns~ heart --how beautiful! Much enjoyed the tenor of your poem, Ink.

Ink Empress
Date: 11/6/2023 10:13:00 AM

Thank you so much always for being so supportive,,.. so grateful

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 11/6/2023 3:27:00 AM

Superbo!

Ink Empress
Date: 11/6/2023 10:15:00 AM

Thank you seeker

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/6/2023 2:47:00 AM

i'm not keen on these really short forms (i like to ramble!) but i think you've done an excellent job with this one - love the wordplay of 'rains/reigns' :)

Ink Empress
Date: 11/6/2023 10:27:00 PM

Me too haha but i feel like sometimes short poems help me keep things concise. Although i still prefer free verse. Thank you so much for your kind feedback

Hiya Sharma

Date: 11/6/2023 12:35:00 AM

Just so eloquently, gloriously and magically carrying your beautiful fragrance.. All these words summarise the essence of this poem, especially such a lovely take on the Than-Bauk form. I'm so intrigued to try this myself as well, looks very interesting! Wow.. The perfect rhyming within syllables and your word choices are beyond impeccable.. Love rains, moon reigns and those cosmic refrains! Gosh, I feel like swirling in the celestial enchantment of your unique wordsmithery, my dear Ink, wowwww

Ink Empress
Date: 11/6/2023 10:27:00 PM

Awwn thank you so much cant wait to read your take for this form too. Always grateful for your support

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/6/2023 12:14:00 AM

In sparse words, you convey great imagery. Well done. Blessings.

Ink Empress
Date: 11/6/2023 10:28:00 PM

Thank you so much Victor always

Deb M

Date: 11/5/2023 11:31:00 PM

Awww simply lovely IE! Debx

Ink Empress
Date: 11/6/2023 10:28:00 PM

Awwn thank you so muchhh

Fading Star Silence

Date: 11/5/2023 10:39:00 PM

In just a few words, you manage to bring such beauty and power merged with delicacy..love rains and the moon reigns, bringing grace and divinity to love..love reigns above all, as sorrow and pain washes away..I’m so entranced with this exquisite piece, as it flows do magnificently! I’m so awestruck by you and your breathtakingly empowering poetry, my beautiful soul sis!

Ink Empress
Date: 11/7/2023 1:16:00 AM

Awwn my beautiful soul sis u always make me feel so good thank u so much truly for all ur kind and generous support

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 11/5/2023 10:04:00 PM

when love rains, moon reigns… mmmmmm look at that opening line!!! It really does !!! Miss that feeling aee!! heart sings in cosmic refrains .. exactly… damn love and all it’s butterflies!!! Ok I shall go to the corner of this room n cry in my loneliness!!! Dnt have enough SPF aee … ran out !! So I shall dig a hole n wait!!

Lioness Onpaper
Date: 11/9/2023 9:53:00 AM

I never left papiii!!!! This old man he plays one .. he plays Knick knack on my head!!!! I cannot aeee… XD .. u send me SPF 2000 aee.. brain cells dieing

Fading Star Silence
Date: 11/5/2023 10:40:00 PM

I’m dying!! My cocoa caffeine twinny! Absolutely agree! <3 :)

Ink Empress
Date: 11/5/2023 10:09:00 PM

Hahah i can send you spf papi! Awwn u left me in vain lol

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