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May 21, 2024
Raining in Summer Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Ink Empress


 

Raining in Summer

Amplifying vehemence of thunder, roaring on skyline ablaze,
Lightning strikes, shattering clouds, sparkling scorching haze,
Blasting dry, sunstruck meadows, drenching thirsty terrain,
Gushing streams, rushing thrust ferocious of turbulent rain.

In realms of dimming yonder, trees whirl, shake, and sway,
Grooving to rhythms of foothills, expressive of feisty ballet,
As incessant downpour pelts, dispersing sweltering heat,
Dancing on prairies and rivers, resounding a boisterous beat.

Down the mountain, over plush valley, beyond an arid knoll,
Breezing with the fleeting storm, reinvigorated vistas scroll,
Scintillating in beams of gold, twilight soon brings to fore,
Adorning arc amethystine, where dream-scapes violet soar.

Enlightened in scarlet rays, as grimace of humid malaise decays,
Revealing a glint, avid day, piercing through tenebrous daze,
Misery retreats rapidly, withering anguish of a vanishing day,
Engraving motifs crimson, upon tapestries once mired in gray.

Reveling in unfolding scene, gawking eve’s resplendent tempo,
From the street, through windows, fixating on the skylit show;
Eyes enamored now applaud~ orange, indigo, smile of rainbow,
Peeking through blazing halo, flaunting art of evenfall aglow.
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Sands Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 4:41 AM
Wow. Congratulations! This is amazing. Nice ending with the rainbow too! :)
George Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 11:29 AM
Congratulations Vijay on your wonderful first-place win. Cheers.
Kendrick Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 1:36 PM
Back with congratulations on your winner in this contest. Way to go. I like the way you approached the theme. Keep on writing. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 9:19 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Raining in Summer" write again. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away With Your Win...........
Empress Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 8:15 AM
I can see trees swirl shake and sway and so much of nature through your artistically painted imagery, flowing seamlessly with such brilliant rhymes dear vijay! Youv defined and described rain in summer in the most creative manner. And theres so many lines in this that left me in awe! Impressive impeccable take! Pleasure reading always your interpretations of my prompts! Congratulations on your first place win! A fave too for me
Buhagiar Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 3:21 AM
Incredibly poetic. Great poetry that only you can compose. Vivid imagery combine with impeccable rhymes.
Nicole Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 8:31 PM
As rain traces each flower stem and the wind whispers softly, it's very soothing, indeed. However, there are times when thunder shakes the earth and gallons of water fall from a dark sky. You've paint such vivid images with your words, Vijay, and I'm in complete awe. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Williams Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 6:08 AM
Hi Vijay, such exquisite imagery you painted in a word picture in your brilliant usual style. I don't have to imagine it as we have been having a lot of rain in Sydney lately, but I still love the pitter patter of rain especially at night. Your last 2 lines particularly caught my attention 'Eyes enamored now applaud~ orange, indigo, smile of rainbow, Peeking through blazing halo, flaunting art of evenfall aglow. particularly as I love rainbows. All the best in the Contest - Hugs Maria
Greenhough Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 8:17 PM
I like the description of a treacherous downpour with a drizzled ending and rainbow. Well described and familiar to my ears. Thank you. A great poem. Good luck.
Buehler Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 2:10 PM
It is with pure magnificence that you have portrayed the beauteous sunset and a summer rain, Vijay. The final verse is exquisite. This is a fave. :)
Kauffman Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 10:49 AM
Vijay, your ability to create images that speak is on full display in this entry for the contest - "malaise decays," "enlightened scarlet rays," "boisterous beat." Well, I could highlight an image in every line. Love the musical references and vivid movement, the action, you describe. I am sure this marvelous downbeat of a summer storm will be on the winners list! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!
Rodgers Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 9:46 AM
Hello Vijay, Your poem is a symphony of nature's fury and beauty, each stanza a creative brushstroke painting a canvas of the elements. The imagery you conjure is fierce and enchanting, capturing thunderstorms' raw power and twilight's serene elegance. Your words transported me into the tempest's heart, where I witnessed the dance of light and shadow with awe and wonder. Truly mesmerizing! - Blessings, my friend, Daniel
Kendrick Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 5:49 AM
Creative lines penned in this one. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Aren't those rainbows awesome. I appreciate your comments on my work. Sara K
Beaufort Avatar
May 22, 2024 at 4:28 PM
Vijay, this is a delight to read. I was thinking what will come next in each subsequent line and was never disappointed. I especially liked how you termed the movement as a ballet. You could be a master weather forecaster!!
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2024 at 4:04 PM
Very vibrant imagery. This really gets across the ambiance of a stormy summer day, Vijay.
Poet Avatar
May 22, 2024 at 2:41 PM
Vijay, your poem showcases exceptional poetic brilliance, utilizing striking metaphors and vivid imagery to convey your message effectively. Your skillful incorporation of nature imagery is always a standout feature in your work. The seamless rhymes and flow of your lines make this poem a strong contender in the contest. The beautiful depiction of a rainbow smile in your poem brings a sense of positivity and charm. Overall, your poetry is captivating with its alluring metaphors my friend. Best wishes for the contest.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 22, 2024 at 10:58 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Raining in Summer" write/great ending. I love hearing the rain... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away..................
Narain Avatar
May 22, 2024 at 10:45 AM
Great poem with vivid imagery and depiction of summer rain. Beautiful. GL in contest.
One Avatar
May 22, 2024 at 10:37 AM
Vivid imagery in every line here Vijay and the rhymes and flow are very good.. Looks like a great contender for me.. Best of luck in the contest..
DiMino Avatar
May 22, 2024 at 8:38 AM
"In realms of dimming yonder, trees whirl, shake, and sway, Grooving to rhythms of foothills, expressive of feisty ballet, As incessant downpour pelts, dispersing sweltering heat, Dancing on prairies and rivers, resounding a boisterous beat." Outrageously good! "Breezing with the fleeting storm, reinvigorated vistas scroll, Scintillating in beams of gold, twilight soon brings to fore, Adorning arc amethystine, where dream-scapes violet soar." A wonderful drench, I am there with you. Great poetry throughout. Blessings.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 22, 2024 at 3:32 AM
A smile of rainbow describes well this lovely poem, ending in a positive mood. Great poetry with alluring imagery.
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