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Rainforest Blues

Rainforest Blues


flora and fauna,
rainforest teeming with life - 
hungry bulldozers

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Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/19/2016 9:15:00 PM

Line three is sad because it shows how Man disrespects Mother Nature - and all for the $$$.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 4/20/2016 8:43:00 AM

Thank you, my friend, for your insightful feedback! We all have to make a concerted effort to preserve this planet for future generations! Warmest regards. Pandita

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/10/2014 5:33:00 AM

hungry bulldozers---rape on nature XXX rajat

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/11/2014 11:38:00 AM

Hi Rajit, as always I love to receive your astute comments. Unfortunately, in our greedy obsession to develop everything, we wantonly destroy this wonderful Earth. Warmest regards, Pandita

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/17/2014 8:09:00 AM

Brutality to the beautiful, I like the contrast. :)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 9/17/2014 7:55:00 PM

Hi Casarah, many thanks for your kind compliments and support which I always appreciate! Warmest regards. Pandita

Kika Ayala

Date: 8/29/2014 8:27:00 PM

I just love your haikus and their surprise at the end! Kika

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/29/2014 10:08:00 PM

Thank you for always complimenting my work. I can't thank you enough! pandita

James Fraser

Date: 6/30/2014 4:32:00 PM

Indeed, those hungry bulldozers. I so hope the Governments of South America sign a pact that makes the Amazon rain forest a National Park. Isn't it wonderful how few words can mean and picture so much. Terrific Haiku that we need to read, absorb, adhere to, and deliver. 'NO BULLDOZERS, end off, powerful poetry Pandita, James :)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/30/2014 5:05:00 PM

Thank you dear friend for your always thought-provoking comments. Well stated!!!! Best regards.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 6/23/2014 6:37:00 PM

Now this poem lady I totally get it and there enough within these word chooses that I can relate and get what you are saying. I really enjoyed this one cool beans here. Love it the lines are short but great a completely wonderful job on this one. I will read a few more and let you know what I think ok catch you on the flip side of another comment lol just kidding. cheri

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/23/2014 7:44:00 PM

Thank you, so much, dear Cheryl. You make me want to keep on writing and improving!

John Michaels

Date: 6/5/2014 7:24:00 AM

Definitely agree! Thanks for stopping by my "Deforestation" poem, along the same lines. Nice write!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/5/2014 8:30:00 AM

Thanks again, John. Have a nice day!

Vera Duggan

Date: 6/5/2014 1:19:00 AM

Very well put Pandita, all in a nutshell.Take care.............Vera.............

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/5/2014 6:31:00 AM

Hi Vera, thank you so much for visiting and for your kind compliment! Kindest regards!

Faye Gibson

Date: 6/3/2014 11:26:00 AM

Wow...great way to put it in perspective. Very good.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/3/2014 11:42:00 AM

Faye, thank you so very much for your kind comments! Kindest regards.

John Beharry

Date: 6/2/2014 11:02:00 PM

Great punch line, taking the reader unexpectedly. I love how you paint the beauty in the first two lines and then contrast it sharply with the "blues" element.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/3/2014 7:19:00 AM

Thank you again, my friend. I so much appreciate the feedback, continued support, and inspiration!