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Rainfall

(by Sara Edgen-Baker & Mystic Rose)
"Let the rain kiss you like a silver liquid drop as it sings to you a lullaby of love"
I am a soft pitter-patter, a gentle lullaby, a cascading melody, trickling down your windowpane. Each droplet is a note in nature’s symphony I am a timeless storyteller weaving tales on the canvas of earth, every droplet is a word, each puddle a paragraph. I am a ballet of nature graceful & wild, leaping from rooftops, pirouetting through puddles watch me, as I dance! I am an intimate embrace from the sky, I wash away the dust of the day, and also your burdens, your worries, your heartaches, your pain. I am a thousand liquid globes reflecting on the greenery, of Mother Nature's lawn... I am a heavy downpour and sometimes, a drizzle falling gently on your head, like a blessing from above ! I am forever changing form and shifting from one state to another, I am either liquid rain or frozen snow, I am a natural white noise, a vapor in your glistening thoughts, a gentle kiss on a sweet Forget-Me-Not. I AM, RAIN

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 3/25/2024 4:39:00 PM
just wonderful, so many brilliant and subtle images of the rain., thanks to the duo again
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Date: 3/25/2024 6:16:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed the poem Yann hope your keeping well :)
Date: 3/25/2024 7:48:00 AM
Soft and tender personification.. This is so beautiful..
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Date: 3/25/2024 6:16:00 PM
I really loved her words and felt the spirit move met to write something to compliment Sara's words. Glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 3/25/2024 6:37:00 AM
Great collaboration on this poem. I love the sound of falling rain, You both did well.
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Date: 3/25/2024 6:15:00 PM
Thankyou Victor its always fun joining words with another poet,
Date: 3/25/2024 3:11:00 AM
love this, mystic xx
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Date: 3/25/2024 6:15:00 PM
So nice to hear from you after so long Mandy, how have you been, ?
Date: 3/25/2024 2:56:00 AM
Wow this is beautiful, i can see why it works so well because both of your words are just so eloquent with a sophisticated touch to it. I really love every word in this, the softness while also depicting rain and the way it flows makes it hard for me to guess who wrote the opening and ending. But let me guess, was the opening done by sara and ending written by you? Either way you both did a phenomenal job! Loved it! A fave it is for me
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Date: 3/25/2024 6:15:00 PM
You are very perceptive In, yes Sara wrote the first section and I wrote the ending. It was fun sharing ink with her, she is an amazing writer. :)
Date: 3/24/2024 4:47:00 PM
thank you, sweet Rose, for making this collaboration possible. Our two poems just blend together, and I love that. I appreciate you and your poetic soul, hugs and blessings, Sara PS Know you inspire me as well :-)
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Date: 3/25/2024 6:14:00 PM
I am so happy that our words went well together, I'm sure God had his hand on it, lol, thank you again for inspiring me to write alongside you Sara, it was a pleasure !
Date: 3/24/2024 2:33:00 PM
Sweet collaboration from two excellent artists/poets. Great personification poetry
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Date: 3/24/2024 4:17:00 PM
Thank you Tom, she inspires so much with her creative words, I was only tagging along lol, thanks for your visit, be well :)

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