Mystic Rose Rose Poet Free verse

Rainfall

(by Sara Edgen-Baker & Mystic Rose) 

"Let the rain kiss you like a silver liquid drop 
as it sings to you a lullaby of love" 

I am a soft pitter-patter, a gentle lullaby, a cascading melody, 
trickling down your windowpane.
Each droplet is a note in nature’s symphony
I am a timeless storyteller weaving tales on the canvas of earth, 
every droplet is a word, each puddle a paragraph.  
I am a ballet of nature graceful & wild, leaping from rooftops, 
pirouetting through puddles watch me, as I dance!
I am an intimate embrace from the sky, I wash away the dust of the day,
and also your burdens, your worries, your heartaches, your pain. 
I am a thousand liquid globes reflecting on the greenery, 
of Mother Nature's lawn...   
I am a heavy downpour and sometimes, a drizzle  
falling gently on your head, like a blessing from above !
I am forever changing form and shifting from one state to another, 
I am either liquid rain or frozen snow, 
I am a natural white noise, a vapor in your glistening thoughts, 
a gentle kiss on a sweet Forget-Me-Not.

I AM, RAIN 

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Yann Rolland March 25, 2024 at 4:39 PM just wonderful, so many brilliant and subtle images of the rain., thanks to the duo again Mystic Rose Rose March 25, 2024 at 6:16 PM Glad you enjoyed the poem Yann hope your keeping well :)

Silent One March 25, 2024 at 7:48 AM Soft and tender personification.. This is so beautiful.. Mystic Rose Rose March 25, 2024 at 6:16 PM I really loved her words and felt the spirit move met to write something to compliment Sara's words. Glad you enjoyed it :)

Victor Buhagiar March 25, 2024 at 6:37 AM Great collaboration on this poem. I love the sound of falling rain, You both did well. Mystic Rose Rose March 25, 2024 at 6:15 PM Thankyou Victor its always fun joining words with another poet,

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 25, 2024 at 3:11 AM love this, mystic xx Mystic Rose Rose March 25, 2024 at 6:15 PM So nice to hear from you after so long Mandy, how have you been, ?

Ink Empress March 25, 2024 at 2:56 AM Wow this is beautiful, i can see why it works so well because both of your words are just so eloquent with a sophisticated touch to it. I really love every word in this, the softness while also depicting rain and the way it flows makes it hard for me to guess who wrote the opening and ending. But let me guess, was the opening done by sara and ending written by you? Either way you both did a phenomenal job! Loved it! A fave it is for me Mystic Rose Rose March 25, 2024 at 6:15 PM You are very perceptive In, yes Sara wrote the first section and I wrote the ending. It was fun sharing ink with her, she is an amazing writer. :)