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Raindrops 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Jcb Brul

Raindrops Swaddling Images

Sunshine rousing cheers echo the day in 
As clouds move to blueness 
And colors arch over earth 
Made anew in rejuvenating pleasure.
A butterfly sings, dances, 
And chooses a flowering Daisy’s ring  
Of white ray petals reaching out 
Between the emerald, green blades, 
In prayer and thank you. 
Puddles mirror their beauty; 
Swelling belly raindrops hang 
Swaddling images. 
Our Creator sets off with His Grace.

6/27/2024
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Goldsmith Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 10:10 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful Raindrop write. What a great picture. I love both the rain/butterflies....   Have a wonderful day with your win..............
Rodrigues Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 8:53 AM
Swelling belly raindrops hang Swaddling images. and love the butterfly’s joy as it chooses the daisy. Nice one, Eve! xx
M  Avatar
July 1, 2024 at 1:47 AM
A vibrant uplifting write Eve! Lovely…Debx
Turner Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 6:08 PM
Perfect start to a day, Eve. I love it when the Creator uses all the colors on his palette:)
Buhagiar Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 2:07 AM
What a great spiritual poem you have regaled us with, Eve. You are very talented. Hugs.
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