Sara Kendrick Poet Free verse

Raindrops Pitapater

As fog shrouds the house
Raindrops pitapaters
From roof onto ground
Rain lingers on the tip
Of French Tarragon
So my tears cling to
Cheek this early morn
On the porch quiet
Opens door to sorrow
But soon sun will shine



(Five syllables, ten lines, unrhymed)

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Lynette Chachere May 19, 2010 at 3:35 PM sorrow.Sara smile): but really, i have the same problem too. i don't know what it is, something that makes me sad all the time. despite that though. you're a beautiful poet to all of us. and we'd like to see a smile.a write with a longing desire for the sun. -Always&Forever Lynette

Daver Austin May 18, 2010 at 4:31 PM Fog, raindrops and tears - how sad. Ah, but you keep hope alive - "Soon the sun will shine." Love, daver

Carol Sunshine Brown May 18, 2010 at 6:42 AM It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Sara. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love,Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 17, 2010 at 9:41 PM Very deep and intense ..sensitive and touching too.. reflective words in your lines .. great title Sara.. enjoyed another creative write from your gifted pen... luv.. Linda-Marie

Katherine Stella May 17, 2010 at 8:06 PM like this new form you have here sara will have to try one sad imagery but bet it was some nice quiet time sry you were blue tho keep up the great work and thanks for your kind comment on my runaway train poem

Doris Culverhouse May 17, 2010 at 5:57 PM enjopyed, sad though

Amy Green May 17, 2010 at 4:24 PM I really like the "beat"... the...(I don't know the word)...the rhythm in which this was written... very nice, indeed.

Carolyn Devonshire May 17, 2010 at 3:50 PM After nearly a foot of rain, the sun finally came out here, so this was a timely read for me, Sara. Very nice use of imagery -- can almost hear the "pitapaters." Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A May 17, 2010 at 2:40 PM well done, Sara enjoyed, cheer up,..p.d.

Francine Roberts May 17, 2010 at 2:25 PM beautifully written Sara