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Raindrops Pitapater

As fog shrouds the house Raindrops pitapaters From roof onto ground Rain lingers on the tip Of French Tarragon So my tears cling to Cheek this early morn On the porch quiet Opens door to sorrow But soon sun will shine (Five syllables, ten lines, unrhymed)

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Lynette Chachere

Date: 5/19/2010 3:35:00 PM

sorrow.Sara smile): but really, i have the same problem too. i don't know what it is, something that makes me sad all the time. despite that though. you're a beautiful poet to all of us. and we'd like to see a smile.a write with a longing desire for the sun. -Always&Forever Lynette

Daver Austin

Date: 5/18/2010 4:31:00 PM

Fog, raindrops and tears - how sad. Ah, but you keep hope alive - "Soon the sun will shine." Love, daver

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2010 6:42:00 AM

It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Sara. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love,Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/17/2010 9:41:00 PM

Very deep and intense ..sensitive and touching too.. reflective words in your lines .. great title Sara.. enjoyed another creative write from your gifted pen... luv.. Linda-Marie

Katherine Stella

Date: 5/17/2010 8:06:00 PM

like this new form you have here sara will have to try one sad imagery but bet it was some nice quiet time sry you were blue tho keep up the great work and thanks for your kind comment on my runaway train poem

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/17/2010 5:57:00 PM

enjopyed, sad though

Amy Green

Date: 5/17/2010 4:24:00 PM

I really like the "beat"... the...(I don't know the word)...the rhythm in which this was written... very nice, indeed.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/17/2010 3:50:00 PM

After nearly a foot of rain, the sun finally came out here, so this was a timely read for me, Sara. Very nice use of imagery -- can almost hear the "pitapaters." Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/17/2010 2:40:00 PM

well done, Sara enjoyed, cheer up,..p.d.

Francine Roberts

Date: 5/17/2010 2:25:00 PM

beautifully written Sara