Holly Bohto Poet Free verse

Raindrops and Stormclouds

If your kisses were 
like raindrops
where would they fall?
Would they fall on
my lips
Or 
nowhere at all?

If your hugs were
like raindrops
where would they land?
Would they land on
my waist
Or 
be absorbed in the sand?

If storm clouds were coming
would you 
hug away the harm?

If storm clouds were coming
would you
kiss away their charm?

If storm clouds were coming
would you
chase them away?

If storm clouds were coming
would you
keep me safe today?

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Thomas Hsi August 10, 2017 at 2:33 AM Raindrops and stormclouds---always beautiful to read about. I really like how you tied in raindrops with kisses and "where they would fall." Bravo! Well done.

Heidi Sands December 8, 2016 at 3:52 PM Nice one Holly. I enjoyed reading this :) Holly Bohto December 8, 2016 at 6:06 PM Thank you Heidi.

Chris Green December 8, 2016 at 3:41 PM I loved this one Holly. Talk about a nice rhythmic flow and the feelings/emotions are expressed perfectly. This poem was beautiful. Holly Bohto December 8, 2016 at 6:09 PM Thank you Rythmic Chris. I always appreciate your encouragement.