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Raindrops

a tiny droplet forms high in the clouds and it drips down to earth with all of the other raindrops and it falls down quickly splashing off umbrellas and sliding down sparkling leaves wet from the rain it drips down from the awnings and eaves, it tumbles slowly down to the sidewalk during the downpour and with all of the other raindrops softly covering the city in icy sheets it drips drops falls tumbles splashes slides down drip drop raindrops on pavement w e t c o n c r e t e s l l l l i i i i p p p p, f a l l l l, s l l l l i i i i d d d d e e e e, t r r i i p... umbrella's open...mushrooms of color blossoming on the street...while a misty rainy fog covers the city

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/27/2011 4:43:00 PM
:] Love it! Where did the puddle and pavement part go?
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Marie Viloria
Date: 6/2/2011 8:23:00 PM
i just fixed it. thanx for reminding me, Sofia!
Date: 5/17/2011 10:48:00 PM
I like this one very much
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Date: 5/17/2011 10:40:00 PM
This is a very creative write, Marie :) enjoyed this so much, and love how you wrote it as concrete :D--sure could use some rain over here! :)
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