Raindrops

Pitter patter,
the rain falls hard.
Pitter patter,
your heart is scarred.

Drip drop, 
no one understands.
Drip drop,
you've tried to make your stand.

Splish splash,
your tears are like the rain.
Splish splash,
a true testament of your pain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
February 26, 2010 at 8:06 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us I enjoyed reading it today. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration Brooke. Love, Carol
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February 25, 2010 at 2:26 PM
Sad poem Brooke, nicely rhymed >> a warm welcome to the Soup >> James
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