Anisha Dutta Poet Verse

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06/18/24

Raindrops 

Third Place

Contest by Jcb Brul

RAINDROPS

   
   Clouds melt
   on deep dolour,
   releasing pain.
   Small raindrops 
   drizzling,
   as tears
    moistening
   grass in mass.

     Sun rays 
    through raindrops 
     split in spectrum.
     Bright rainbow 
     is pasted 
     on sky album.

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Sara Kendrick July 2, 2024 at 4:06 AM I am delighted to see your name on the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations to you. Sara K

Crystol Woods June 29, 2024 at 9:18 AM Nice work here! What a lovely way to go with this contest theme... rainbows! Congratulations! Xo

Susan Ashley June 25, 2024 at 6:05 PM Dear Anisha, I adore "Sun rays/through raindrops/split in spectrum./Bright rainbow/in pasted/on sky album." Such stunning imagery! The first verse is beautifully, sadly emotive. Congratulations for your win in Jcb's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Daniel Henry Rodgers June 19, 2024 at 10:27 AM Dear Anisha, I loved your poem on raindrops and all the alliterations. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel