RAINDROPS

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06/18/24

Raindrops

Third Place

Contest by Jcb Brul

   
   Clouds melt
   on deep dolour,
   releasing pain.
   Small raindrops 
   drizzling,
   as tears
    moistening
   grass in mass.

     Sun rays 
    through raindrops 
     split in spectrum.
     Bright rainbow 
     is pasted 
     on sky album.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/2/2024 4:06:00 AM

I am delighted to see your name on the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations to you. Sara K

Crystol Woods

Date: 6/29/2024 9:18:00 AM

Nice work here! What a lovely way to go with this contest theme... rainbows! Congratulations! Xo

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/25/2024 6:05:00 PM

Dear Anisha, I adore "Sun rays/through raindrops/split in spectrum./Bright rainbow/in pasted/on sky album." Such stunning imagery! The first verse is beautifully, sadly emotive. Congratulations for your win in Jcb's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 6/19/2024 10:27:00 AM

Dear Anisha, I loved your poem on raindrops and all the alliterations. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel