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Raindrops
The sad surreal sense of loneliness
is felt more intently when the rain falls
as each raindrop throbs in the ear
pouring their sound of sadness into the soul
of aches and pain that pierces the heart
while sitting alone in the rain's dreary darkness
time becomes an endless clock hand
that never turns
where the sound of rain invites memories
of times when the rain fell not from clouds
rather from the eyes
where tracks were not seen etching the soil
rather they etched the face
making raindrops a secret garden
of pelting sound and visual serenade
that give threads of silent reflection
to be woven into a softer fabric
of emotional ponderings
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