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The sad surreal sense of loneliness is felt more intently when the rain falls as each raindrop throbs in the ear pouring their sound of sadness into the soul of aches and pain that pierces the heart while sitting alone in the rain's dreary darkness time becomes an endless clock hand that never turns where the sound of rain invites memories of times when the rain fell not from clouds rather from the eyes where tracks were not seen etching the soil rather they etched the face making raindrops a secret garden of pelting sound and visual serenade that give threads of silent reflection to be woven into a softer fabric of emotional ponderings

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Date: 6/28/2024 3:50:00 AM
"as each raindrop throbs in the ear pouring their sound of sadness into the soul of aches and pain that pierces the heart" - The gloomy aspect of the raindrop is beautifully brought out. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/26/2024 9:27:00 AM
Creative lines penned for JCB Burl's poetry contest. Way to go and congratulations on your winner. Sara K
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Date: 6/23/2024 5:43:00 PM
my, I feel the same way...some hours back, rain poured in the city and I couldn't help but become melancholic...a poem divine, frederick...thanks for dropping by my page! blessings
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Date: 6/19/2024 7:01:00 AM
Gosh, how do you always write in such evocative ways? Truly this is soul touching and so heartfelt and i felt it more as i read “ time becomes an endless clock hand that never turns where the sound of rain invites memories of times when the rain fell not from clouds rather from the eyes” that hits so deep! A fave this is for me! Best wishes for the contest
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Date: 6/18/2024 6:46:00 PM
there is something about rain that makes us reminisce of life events...wonderfully penned, i love this ,frederick! Blessings
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Date: 6/18/2024 3:29:00 PM
"Raindrops keep falling on my head, but that doesn't mean my eyes will soon be turning red, crying's not for me/cuz, I'm never gonna stop the rain by complaining/ because I'm free/nothing's worrying me..." My first impression dear poet
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Date: 6/18/2024 12:09:00 PM
a fav ~ a poignant exploration of solitude and nostalgia. i also love rain poetry!
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