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Raindrops keep falling gently, Murmuring passionate songs gone by, Each drop flowing down the pane, Soft reminders of sweet pain. Yet in their fall, hope does gleam, A future bright, a distant dream. In every puddle, in every stream, Flows the essence of a dream.

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Date: 6/28/2024 4:10:00 AM
"In every puddle, in every stream, Flows the essence of a dream." - A grand poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/26/2024 9:32:00 AM
Ahh!! I like this one. Creative lines penned for JCB Burl's poetry contest. Way to go and congratulations on your winner. Sara K
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Date: 6/25/2024 8:43:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Raindrops" write again. Have a wonderful day with your win..............
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Date: 6/19/2024 8:00:00 PM
Very lovely, Jay.
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Date: 6/19/2024 8:44:00 AM
Dear Jay, So well said and yes it does remind me of songs back in the day. I loved reading your words. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 6/19/2024 4:38:00 AM
"In every puddle, in every stream, Flows the essence of a dream.".... Love this sweet ending of the poem.
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Date: 6/18/2024 3:46:00 PM
that sounds like the words to a song dear poet. I'd love to sing it one day :)
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Date: 6/18/2024 12:33:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your "Raindrops" write. What a cute picture. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a great/blessed day writing away.................
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Date: 6/18/2024 12:06:00 PM
the cute cat with the umbrella! thanks for sharing
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Date: 6/18/2024 10:32:00 AM
Hello Jay Narain, I enjoy to listen to the rainxdrops fall on the window cell i love the sound it makes. I will make this poem my fav. Enjoy your day my friend./Darlene/
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