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Raindrops

Raindrops keep falling gently,  
Murmuring passionate songs gone by, 
Each drop flowing down the pane,  
Soft reminders of sweet pain. 

Yet in their fall, hope does gleam,  
A future bright, a distant dream.  
In every puddle, in every stream,  
Flows the essence of a dream.
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Alex Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 4:10 AM
"In every puddle, in every stream, Flows the essence of a dream." - A grand poem. Congratulations!
Kendrick Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 9:32 AM
Ahh!! I like this one. Creative lines penned for JCB Burl's poetry contest. Way to go and congratulations on your winner. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 8:43 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Raindrops" write again. Have a wonderful day with your win..............
Dietrich Avatar
June 19, 2024 at 8:00 PM
Very lovely, Jay.
Rodgers Avatar
June 19, 2024 at 8:44 AM
Dear Jay, So well said and yes it does remind me of songs back in the day. I loved reading your words. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
George Avatar
June 19, 2024 at 4:38 AM
"In every puddle, in every stream, Flows the essence of a dream.".... Love this sweet ending of the poem.
Rose  Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 3:46 PM
that sounds like the words to a song dear poet. I'd love to sing it one day :)
Goldsmith Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 12:33 PM
I enjoyed reading your "Raindrops" write. What a cute picture. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a great/blessed day writing away.................
blegh Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 12:06 PM
the cute cat with the umbrella! thanks for sharing
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 10:32 AM
Hello Jay Narain, I enjoy to listen to the rainxdrops fall on the window cell i love the sound it makes. I will make this poem my fav. Enjoy your day my friend./Darlene/
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