Notes About The Poem
For: Raindrops Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Jcb Brul

Raindrops

Raindrops falling on cobblestone streets
Reflecting in glints of gold like tweets,
Reminding me the world I walk 
Returns to dusty chalk~
Remolded by the Master's hand,
Replete with peace throughout the land;
Respite for the weary, the lion and the Lamb.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Alex Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 4:00 AM
A short and sweet poem. Congratulations!
Achara Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 6:46 AM
Thank you.
Kendrick Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 9:29 AM
Creative lines penned for JCB Burl's poetry contest. Way to go and congratulations on your winner. Sara K
Achara Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 10:27 AM
Thank you.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 8:35 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Raindrops" is a wonderful write/great picture. Wish I was walking this street. I love walking in the rain. Have a wonderful day with your win..............
Achara Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 2:59 PM
Thank you.
Greenhough Avatar
June 17, 2024 at 7:44 AM
Refreshing rain. You describe this weather so well that I can hear the pitter-patter. A lovely write.
Achara Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 2:59 PM
Thank you.
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