Raindrops

on a purely magical glorious rainy morning, the vermillion rose bush swaying gently - clouds delighted to meet the thankful earth, drizzling soil, petrichor inspires dreams, drip-drop, drip-drop... the strumming sonata brings lavender memories of you and me! inviting swing and bubbling laughter, luminous flowers and ebullient chatter, humming raindrops hold them all, pitter-patter, pitter-patter ~ nature's softest rhapsody ~ listen to them fall! whisper to me in your velvety voice, reminisce our moments of endless joy I am breathless! Edited on November 7, 2022 "Inspiring Rainy Days" Poetry Contest Sponsor:Sotto Poet

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/13/2022 11:22:00 AM

- Your rain sounds like music and joy ... a lovely poem, Mala - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) -

Eve Roper

Date: 11/12/2022 11:33:00 PM

Congratulation on your win with this great imagery, sound, and feeling. Many blessing my friend

Christuraj Alex

Date: 11/12/2022 8:03:00 PM

Beautiful scene of the monsoon, especially of India, Great writing. Congratulations!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/13/2020 2:57:00 PM

I think you are a romantic Malabika. This is lovely. Very nice to meet you. A warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Aloha, Connie

Eve Roper
Date: 11/12/2022 11:35:00 PM

I got caught with her photo, since she's passed. There for a minute I thought she was still with us. Great warm lady our Connie.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/14/2020 6:44:00 AM

Dear Connie, Very nice to meet you too! I joined PoetrySoup recently, but already feeling amazing to meet poet-friends like you with similar interests. You are right, I am probably a romantic. Thank you for welcoming me, Dear Friend.