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Raindrops

Raindrops
cool, wet
falling, landing, splashing
puddles, floods, flowers, trees
soaking, nourishing, brightening
hopeful, brilliant
rainbows




June 21, 2019
For Joseph May’s “Sparkling Diamonds” contest

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Kash Poet

Date: 4/17/2020 8:48:00 PM

Lovely...sparkling like diamond! How are you Carolyn?

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 10/11/2019 5:51:00 PM

Wow, such an apt poem for the contest, "Sparkling Diamonds"! Loved the simplicity of it!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2019 3:05:00 PM

brilliant idea!! I do not even know of this contest, Carolyn. I need to go take another look at the contest page!

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/12/2019 6:53:00 PM

Lovely, Carolyn.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 8/11/2019 3:03:00 PM

Carolyn, I like this poem. I must read up on Diamante style one day. Your poem represents it so well. May your muse sleep well. -Richard

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/9/2019 5:29:00 AM

A belated congratulations to you Carolyn. I loved this beauty! I am always thrilled when it rains. Once it rained for 40 days and nights here on Oahu...sounds biblical, but it is true. I never tired of it. : ) I hope you are well. xxoo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2019 7:39:00 PM

I see you won with this a while back. Congrats, Carolyn, and why no new poems??

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/10/2019 12:01:00 PM

My muse is sleeping. Thanks for stopping by!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/24/2019 8:12:00 AM

A very pretty piece.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/11/2019 4:31:00 PM

Refreshing and Sparkling indeed..Love this.

Jack Horne

Date: 7/9/2019 1:28:00 PM

a sure winner with this refreshing write x

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/8/2019 1:31:00 PM

Hello Carolyn Devonshire, the rain drops are all these things. Have a nice day my friend.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/6/2019 7:48:00 AM

Back with congratulations, Carolyn...well done! Hugs // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/2/2019 1:39:00 PM

Hello Carolyn Devonshire, raindrops are also tears that are shed from tears shed to form new rivers and streams. have a nice day my friend.

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/29/2019 8:42:00 AM

Congrats!! on the win Carolyn...well crafted my friend...sending love...^WW^

M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/29/2019 2:27:00 AM

A very colorful Diamante; congratulations on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/27/2019 12:19:00 AM

Glad to see u on winner list, my friend. My sister went to bed early u know me. I can never get to sleep. So here I am struggling with cell phone before it runs out of battery. My son is giving the eulogy at tomorrow's funeral. Todays little service was nice. My sister, I and cousin sylvia shared our memories of my dad.