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Raindrops

Raindrops
cool, wet
falling, landing, splashing
puddles, floods, flowers, trees
soaking, nourishing, brightening
hopeful, brilliant
rainbows




June 21, 2019
For Joseph May’s “Sparkling Diamonds” contest

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Kash Poet

April 17, 2020 at 8:48 PM

Lovely...sparkling like diamond! How are you Carolyn?

Smita Kulkarni

October 11, 2019 at 5:51 PM

Wow, such an apt poem for the contest, "Sparkling Diamonds"! Loved the simplicity of it!

Andrea Dietrich

August 21, 2019 at 3:05 PM

brilliant idea!! I do not even know of this contest, Carolyn. I need to go take another look at the contest page!

Line Gauthier

August 12, 2019 at 6:53 PM

Lovely, Carolyn.

Quoth Theraven

August 11, 2019 at 3:03 PM

Carolyn, I like this poem. I must read up on Diamante style one day. Your poem represents it so well. May your muse sleep well. -Richard

Connie Marcum Wong

August 9, 2019 at 5:29 AM

A belated congratulations to you Carolyn. I loved this beauty! I am always thrilled when it rains. Once it rained for 40 days and nights here on Oahu...sounds biblical, but it is true. I never tired of it. : ) I hope you are well. xxoo

Andrea Dietrich

August 8, 2019 at 7:39 PM

I see you won with this a while back. Congrats, Carolyn, and why no new poems??

Carolyn Devonshire

August 10, 2019 at 12:01 PM

My muse is sleeping. Thanks for stopping by!

Richard Lamoureux

July 24, 2019 at 8:12 AM

A very pretty piece.

Charmaine Chircop

July 11, 2019 at 4:31 PM

Refreshing and Sparkling indeed..Love this.

Jack Horne

July 9, 2019 at 1:28 PM

a sure winner with this refreshing write x

Darlene De Beaulieu

July 8, 2019 at 1:31 PM

Hello Carolyn Devonshire, the rain drops are all these things. Have a nice day my friend.

Paul Callus

July 6, 2019 at 7:48 AM

Back with congratulations, Carolyn...well done! Hugs // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu

July 2, 2019 at 1:39 PM

Hello Carolyn Devonshire, raindrops are also tears that are shed from tears shed to form new rivers and streams. have a nice day my friend.

Winged Warrior

June 29, 2019 at 8:42 AM

Congrats!! on the win Carolyn...well crafted my friend...sending love...^WW^

M. L. Kiser

June 29, 2019 at 2:27 AM

A very colorful Diamante; congratulations on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

June 27, 2019 at 12:19 AM

Glad to see u on winner list, my friend. My sister went to bed early u know me. I can never get to sleep. So here I am struggling with cell phone before it runs out of battery. My son is giving the eulogy at tomorrow's funeral. Todays little service was nice. My sister, I and cousin sylvia shared our memories of my dad.