Apoorva Patrikar Poet Concrete

Rainbow's Spread Hapiness

Be it half, or be it full
                                       Rainbows are just so beautiful
                                    An angel's slide, God's beautiful art
                            Butterflies seem to take colors from this cart
                    It is the smile of the rain                 with the rays of sun
                  It proves to dark times                        that happiness won 
                 Nature's lovely band                               decorates the sky
               A belt of colors, that                                  are painted so high
               It brings a big smile                                     on each one's face
               VIBGYOR we say                                            colors we can feel 
             Rainbows spread joy                                       and that too for free!

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... Gigno February 5, 2013 at 8:30 PM !!!

Len Gasun October 2, 2012 at 8:32 AM MY HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN MY DEAR FRIEND, APOORVA. THIS IS REALLY GREAT! I LOVE IT! I WILL INCLUDE THIS IN MY FAVOURITES. IF YOU DON'T MIND, I WILL SHOW THIS TO MY STUDENTS. THANK YOU SO MUCH! love, Leonora

Carol Sunshine Brown October 1, 2012 at 6:05 AM Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Rainbow Fun~" contest Apoorva. Love, Carol

Joe Maverick September 30, 2012 at 1:50 PM A real trendy bendy write here that "cornered you a win" Apoorva, I never guessed concrete could be so colourful and "verse-tile" L O L..! (well done )

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 29, 2012 at 8:23 AM This is clever apoorva, well done and congratulations xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 29, 2012 at 6:37 AM CONGRATS APOORVA ON A TREMENDOUS WRITE AND BIG WIN FOR AN AMAZING ENTRY LUV ..

Joseph May September 29, 2012 at 4:57 AM congrats on your win with this creative write..

Tahera Mannan September 29, 2012 at 2:26 AM Many congrats Apoorva for this wonderful win

Poet Destroyer A September 29, 2012 at 12:11 AM Apoorva, I'm having tons of rainbow fun ;-) reading and congratulating all my colorful "Rainbow Fun" winners. A sweet congratulations, ,,thank you for inspiring the contest...goodnight~ xox~ PD

Poet Destroyer A September 28, 2012 at 9:40 PM Apoorva, i love the entire concrete,, I must say, adding the rainbow was brilliant... xx~pd

Jon A Cavanaugh September 28, 2012 at 4:33 PM How fun, the poem shaped like a rainbow with rhyme. Does VIBGYOR have another meaning beyond the colors of the rainbow? It would be fun if it did.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 27, 2012 at 9:18 AM HOW LOVELY BOTH IN SHAPE AND SENTIMENT APOORVA .. BEST WISHES LUV ..

Harry Horsman September 26, 2012 at 3:28 PM wow this is so good so creative, and a awesome poem to boot, apoorva this is wonderful ,,