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Rainbow's Spread Hapiness

Be it half, or be it full Rainbows are just so beautiful An angel's slide, God's beautiful art Butterflies seem to take colors from this cart It is the smile of the rain with the rays of sun It proves to dark times that happiness won Nature's lovely band decorates the sky A belt of colors, that are painted so high It brings a big smile on each one's face VIBGYOR we say colors we can feel Rainbows spread joy and that too for free!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/5/2013 8:30:00 PM
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Date: 10/2/2012 8:32:00 AM
MY HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN MY DEAR FRIEND, APOORVA. THIS IS REALLY GREAT! I LOVE IT! I WILL INCLUDE THIS IN MY FAVOURITES. IF YOU DON'T MIND, I WILL SHOW THIS TO MY STUDENTS. THANK YOU SO MUCH! love, Leonora
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Date: 10/1/2012 6:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Rainbow Fun~" contest Apoorva. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2012 1:50:00 PM
A real trendy bendy write here that "cornered you a win" Apoorva, I never guessed concrete could be so colourful and "verse-tile" L O L..! (well done )
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Date: 9/29/2012 8:23:00 AM
This is clever apoorva, well done and congratulations xx
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Date: 9/29/2012 6:37:00 AM
CONGRATS APOORVA ON A TREMENDOUS WRITE AND BIG WIN FOR AN AMAZING ENTRY LUV ..
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Date: 9/29/2012 4:57:00 AM
congrats on your win with this creative write..
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Date: 9/29/2012 2:26:00 AM
Many congrats Apoorva for this wonderful win
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Date: 9/29/2012 12:11:00 AM
Apoorva, I'm having tons of rainbow fun ;-) reading and congratulating all my colorful "Rainbow Fun" winners. A sweet congratulations, ,,thank you for inspiring the contest...goodnight~ xox~ PD
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Date: 9/28/2012 9:40:00 PM
Apoorva, i love the entire concrete,, I must say, adding the rainbow was brilliant... xx~pd
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Date: 9/28/2012 4:33:00 PM
How fun, the poem shaped like a rainbow with rhyme. Does VIBGYOR have another meaning beyond the colors of the rainbow? It would be fun if it did.
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Date: 9/27/2012 9:18:00 AM
HOW LOVELY BOTH IN SHAPE AND SENTIMENT APOORVA .. BEST WISHES LUV ..
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Date: 9/26/2012 3:28:00 PM
wow this is so good so creative, and a awesome poem to boot, apoorva this is wonderful ,,
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