Rainbows

R acing around on busy days A rainbow stops us in our tracts. I n awe we pause to ponder on N ature's beautiful bounty. B estowing again childlike wonder O n bustling distracted adults. W e absorb the colours into our S ouls and proceed renewed.

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 11/14/2018 5:51:00 AM

nice acrostic Jean, really liked this showing your colourful imagery. Blessings, Gordon

Jean Murray
Date: 11/14/2018 6:16:00 AM

Thank you Gordon. Acrostic is one of my favourite forms, and rainbows are one of my favourite things.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/12/2018 2:08:00 AM

- Always take time to enjoy the rainbow colors - Lovely poem. Jean :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray
Date: 11/12/2018 11:27:00 AM

Hi Sunshine! It didn't place in the contest, but as long as you like it, that's good enough for me.

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/6/2018 6:45:00 PM

Very sweet, Jean. Lovely.

Jean Murray
Date: 11/6/2018 7:03:00 PM

Thank you Line. Lovely to see your positive comment.