Maclawrence Famuyiwa Poet Other

Rainbow shimmering in sun

Peacock
Bright feathers
Graceful and proud
Rainbow shimmering in sun
Beautiful

Beautiful
Male peafowl
Magnificent courting display
Elegance in every motion
Majestic

Majestic
Iridescent plumage
Tall and slender
National bird of India
Revered

Revered
Timeless treasure
Feathers like blueberries
Loved across the world
Adorable



An elfchen chain
Written 19th January, 2025.

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thriveni c mysore January 27, 2025 at 5:28 AM beautiful flow of thoughts dear poet. This is the first time I am reading peacock called as 'Rainbow shimmering in Sun'! Amazing. Happy writing dear poet. Cheers! Maclawrence Famuyiwa January 27, 2025 at 7:43 AM Thanks for finding my poem enjoyable. I really appreciate this your kind gesture.

Mark Toney January 26, 2025 at 8:04 AM Maclawrence, I appreciate your support for my Flash Poetry Challenge (8). Because you met the Bonus Challenge, your poem is featured in my 'Results' blog, which is now up and running. Your ending prompt words for your Elfchen chain are "Beautiful, Majestic, Revered, and Adorable." This is a lovely ode to the "male peafowl" that is truly "Loved across the world." A Fav poem for me. Maclawrence Famuyiwa January 26, 2025 at 8:39 AM Thanks for giving me this special honour and I appreciate each of the words you gracefully used to appreciate my poem. Many thanks.