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Rainbow of Colors

rainbow of colors
mixing blending painting earth….
diverse tapestry 




Note:  For Charles Henderson's "Strict Haiku 2" Contest

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/7/2011 7:48:00 AM

Lovely Haiku, Audrey! What would we do without our "Rainbow of Colors?" Thank your for you ongoing kind comments on mine. Best of success for the contest!...Love, Gert

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/5/2011 2:15:00 PM

Audrey, This is so beautiful, the colours and blending into a tapestry are wonderful:))

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/4/2011 5:22:00 AM

ah -never thought of the rainbow as an artist before! Well done Audrey. Gets me in an inspired mood this 2011 morn. Thanks! Thank you for your supportive and encouraging comments-

Kash Poet

Date: 1/3/2011 11:48:00 PM

This is a wonderful Haiku leaving in my mind the impression of a rainbow.Must be a winner.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/3/2011 6:02:00 PM

Just read your contest update Audrey...sincerely hope u are feeling much better and will be on the mend very soon..my friend.. never good being sick around holiday time luv... good luck with your contest.. enjoyed this theme...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/3/2011 9:32:00 AM

A tapestry of diversity that blends the hearts of all people is much needed, Dimples. An exquisitite and powerful haiku! Wishing you success in Charles' contest, dear friend. Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/3/2011 7:45:00 AM

Stunning images Audrey, much enjoyed.. Good luck for Charles's contest.. ;-) How are you doing? love Wilma

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/2/2011 6:14:00 PM

Very colorful indeed. These few words remind me of the musical "Joseph and the Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat" by Andrew Lloyd Webber and Tim Rice. This appears to be a strong candidate for the contest.

John Rhinem

Date: 1/2/2011 4:39:00 PM

Smile ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Evening My Dear, Atop The Cascading Rainbows Colours of, 'Beautiful Love;'" Bye My Dear!:) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 1/2/2011 4:36:00 PM

Smile ~ You know, We All have a choice as unto how We view things and, "This Magnificent Painting" would and is a great example unto this "Truth" ~ "Beautiful & A Fave" ~ I hope that "Your Beauty" is doing wonderfully this New Years day and, "Thank You," for blessing my heart with "Your Treasures" kind coms; a very lovely treat to always behold; "Your 'Light!!!'" ~ ....Cont:)

John Rhinem

Date: 1/2/2011 4:29:00 PM

Smile ~ "Rainbow Colours; 'Bright & Beautiful Hues,' of The Archings Lights Just, Like, 'You,' My 'Dear, Precious & Priceless Audrey Carey!!!'" ~ So many different mixtures amid endless arrays form the tapestries fabrics of life my dear and, "Your Beauty" pointed unto the lovely bows promising mark of, a living and breathing Hope until the closing doors of a bygone era within the pages of a once upon a time ~ ....Cont:)

Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/2/2011 2:25:00 PM

Hi Audrey. Thanks for your kind comment. Love the way you painted this. Autumn is my favourite time of the year. Best of luck with this fine piece. Eamon

Jancarl Campi

Date: 1/2/2011 8:28:00 AM

Hi, Happy New Year! THanks for your sweet comment on my work. I love rainbows and can't remember the last time I saw one. A rainbow is indeed God's gift to us. Hope this is a winner. Take care and keep writing. Carpe Diem, Jancarl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/2/2011 4:44:00 AM

Good luck with this wonderful work..Reads like a winner to me..Your presence at my work lifted my spirits..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/1/2011 11:56:00 PM

Diverse is for sure, Audrey. Nice one, and good luck in the contest. Luv, Andrea

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 1/1/2011 5:51:00 PM

A wonderfully discriptive Haiku, I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. Caryl

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/1/2011 5:47:00 PM

Very apt images you have worded for colors of rainbow. Audrey

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/1/2011 4:49:00 PM

Beautiful Audrey, I love the weaving of your words in this tapestry:))

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/1/2011 4:15:00 PM

Amazing words Audrey in your Haiku .. pleasant and visual ..vibrant and lovely.. now u must remove your caps .. no caps Chaz said in his rules.. so not to be disqualified luv.. good luck in the contest... my entry is 'wilderness treasures'....

Deb Wilson

Date: 1/1/2011 4:01:00 PM

I think this is just lovely Audrey! Hope you have a very Happy New Year love,Deb

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/1/2011 3:29:00 PM

wowser! correct formamundo!!!HUZZAH!Doing good off to dinner, hope your healthy & happy! Light & Love [ps I like the metaphoric layering of the cutting line! yup black white yellow red!]

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