Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Rhyme

Rainbow Music

RAINBOW MUSIC

In the dusk dim of fallen sky cloud’s black clumps rise
Cold sun at the other end spreads the drained rays 
Blind blizzard strikes the mute sky with dark pain
Storm surge melts cloud in torrent of rain
Drenched sky reflects back the wet sun
In color threads dream is spun
In striped curve of rainbow
Love flashes hearts’ glow
Spark of lyric
Turns music
Unique.

(Syllable count of each line steadily decreases from 12 to 2
Word count of each line steadily decreases from 11 to 1)


March 24, 2018.

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Susan Gentry April 19, 2018 at 10:32 AM Congratulations on your win with this beautiful write. Liked your definitive rhymes and imagery. Subimal Sinha-Roy April 20, 2018 at 1:57 AM Thank you, Susan.

Eve Roper April 17, 2018 at 8:18 PM Congratulations on your win, Subimal .. Hugs Eve ~`* Subimal Sinha-Roy April 18, 2018 at 2:56 AM Thank you, Eve.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 17, 2018 at 12:13 PM - Best wishes and congratulations with your 2nd place in the contest, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Subimal Sinha-Roy April 18, 2018 at 2:56 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Jan Allison April 17, 2018 at 10:44 AM wow you did so well with decreased syllables and lines! congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Subimal Sinha-Roy April 18, 2018 at 2:56 AM Thank you, Jan for visiting.

Line Gauthier April 17, 2018 at 10:10 AM Thanks for your lovely entry, Subimal. I loved that you approached it as a double challenge with words and syllables. Well done and congrats on a well deserved podium win! Subimal Sinha-Roy April 18, 2018 at 2:56 AM Thank you, Line for liking the write.

Nette Onclaud March 24, 2018 at 3:27 PM lovely shape and form, lovelier the poem, subimal.. huggs Subimal Sinha-Roy April 18, 2018 at 2:55 AM Thank you, Nette.

Andrea Dietrich March 24, 2018 at 10:16 AM Very nicely done. I am impressed you combined both syllable count AND word count for your decreasing lines. Subimal Sinha-Roy April 18, 2018 at 2:55 AM Thank you, Andrea for your nice comments.

Heidi Sands March 24, 2018 at 8:48 AM Excellent Subimal. Well written :) Subimal Sinha-Roy March 25, 2018 at 8:12 AM Thank you, Heidi.