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Rainbow Music

RAINBOW MUSIC In the dusk dim of fallen sky cloud’s black clumps rise Cold sun at the other end spreads the drained rays Blind blizzard strikes the mute sky with dark pain Storm surge melts cloud in torrent of rain Drenched sky reflects back the wet sun In color threads dream is spun In striped curve of rainbow Love flashes hearts’ glow Spark of lyric Turns music Unique. (Syllable count of each line steadily decreases from 12 to 2 Word count of each line steadily decreases from 11 to 1) March 24, 2018.

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Susan Gentry

Date: 4/19/2018 10:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this beautiful write. Liked your definitive rhymes and imagery.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/20/2018 1:57:00 AM

Thank you, Susan.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/17/2018 8:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Subimal .. Hugs Eve ~`*

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/18/2018 2:56:00 AM

Thank you, Eve.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/17/2018 12:13:00 PM

- Best wishes and congratulations with your 2nd place in the contest, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/18/2018 2:56:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/17/2018 10:44:00 AM

wow you did so well with decreased syllables and lines! congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/18/2018 2:56:00 AM

Thank you, Jan for visiting.

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/17/2018 10:10:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely entry, Subimal. I loved that you approached it as a double challenge with words and syllables. Well done and congrats on a well deserved podium win!

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/18/2018 2:56:00 AM

Thank you, Line for liking the write.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/24/2018 3:27:00 PM

lovely shape and form, lovelier the poem, subimal.. huggs

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/18/2018 2:55:00 AM

Thank you, Nette.

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/24/2018 8:48:00 AM

Excellent Subimal. Well written :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/25/2018 8:12:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi.