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Rainbow Music

RAINBOW MUSIC

In the dusk dim of fallen sky cloud’s black clumps rise
Cold sun at the other end spreads the drained rays 
Blind blizzard strikes the mute sky with dark pain
Storm surge melts cloud in torrent of rain
Drenched sky reflects back the wet sun
In color threads dream is spun
In striped curve of rainbow
Love flashes hearts’ glow
Spark of lyric
Turns music
Unique.

(Syllable count of each line steadily decreases from 12 to 2
Word count of each line steadily decreases from 11 to 1)


March 24, 2018.

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Susan Gentry Date: 4/19/2018 10:32:00 AM Congratulations on your win with this beautiful write. Liked your definitive rhymes and imagery. Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 4/20/2018 1:57:00 AM Thank you, Susan.

Eve Roper Date: 4/17/2018 8:18:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Subimal .. Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 4/18/2018 2:56:00 AM Thank you, Eve.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/17/2018 12:13:00 PM - Best wishes and congratulations with your 2nd place in the contest, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 4/18/2018 2:56:00 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Jan Allison Date: 4/17/2018 10:44:00 AM wow you did so well with decreased syllables and lines! congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 4/18/2018 2:56:00 AM Thank you, Jan for visiting.

Line Gauthier Date: 4/17/2018 10:10:00 AM Thanks for your lovely entry, Subimal. I loved that you approached it as a double challenge with words and syllables. Well done and congrats on a well deserved podium win! Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 4/18/2018 2:56:00 AM Thank you, Line for liking the write.

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/24/2018 3:27:00 PM lovely shape and form, lovelier the poem, subimal.. huggs Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 4/18/2018 2:55:00 AM Thank you, Nette.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/24/2018 10:16:00 AM Very nicely done. I am impressed you combined both syllable count AND word count for your decreasing lines. Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 4/18/2018 2:55:00 AM Thank you, Andrea for your nice comments.

Heidi Sands Date: 3/24/2018 8:48:00 AM Excellent Subimal. Well written :) Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 3/25/2018 8:12:00 AM Thank you, Heidi.