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Rainbow Mist

The rushing waters,
Claps hard against the smooth rocks;
Misting a rainbow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 6/5/2009 12:05:00 PM
i likes rainbows haha niiice kidd=]]TinkBabyy
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Date: 6/2/2009 2:40:00 PM
Excellent Haiku Justin, delightful write of the rainbow>James
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Date: 5/30/2009 4:46:00 PM
Brilliant work Justin, I love the entirety of this haiku...Raul
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Date: 5/27/2009 6:11:00 PM
The reader can see the water, hear it fall against the rocks and feel the mist, Justin. Outstanding Haiku that fills up our senses! Love, Carolyn
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