Rainbow Mist

The rushing waters,
Claps hard against the smooth rocks;
Misting a rainbow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 5, 2009 at 12:05 PM
i likes rainbows haha niiice kidd=]]TinkBabyy
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June 2, 2009 at 2:40 PM
Excellent Haiku Justin, delightful write of the rainbow>James
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May 30, 2009 at 4:46 PM
Brilliant work Justin, I love the entirety of this haiku...Raul
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May 27, 2009 at 6:11 PM
The reader can see the water, hear it fall against the rocks and feel the mist, Justin. Outstanding Haiku that fills up our senses! Love, Carolyn
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