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Rainbow Kink

Toss me in prism And throw away the key I'm having a spasm I'm down on one knee Cheer Bear underwear Marry me 10.24.18 Rainbows Poetry Contest Sponsored by Craig Cornish

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Jeff Connelly

Date: 10/8/2019 11:32:00 AM

Reading this Maureen, is it safe to say that this was meant more then for a contest in content? A brilliant poem!!! Thanks.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/9/2019 7:03:00 AM

Heh, ya have to know the Care Bears to get it ;), who knows where the muse goes~

CayCay Jennings

Date: 10/27/2018 8:23:00 PM

Connie nailed the word - unique and that also makes it an eye opener in the best possible way. Fun gem, Maureen! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/27/2018 10:02:00 PM

Thank you CayCay! :) hugs! xomo

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/24/2018 6:10:00 PM

I will bet Craig will like this clever entry Mo. Your poetry is always unique and fun to read! : )

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/24/2018 10:23:00 PM

I hope so :) Thank you Connie, that is the nicest thing to say! Hugs! xomo

Rico Leffanta

Date: 10/24/2018 5:38:00 PM

Too bad you can't retire on your prism line - clearly a winner - but you lost me on the underwear of which I have zero knowledge. Aloha! Rico

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/24/2018 10:16:00 PM

Lol ;) Thankya! The Care Bears were an 8o's phenomenon, stuffed toys and cartoons, films. Cheer Bear was the one with a rainbow on it's belly. My favourite was Grumpy Bear, he had thunderclouds on his. xomo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/24/2018 4:39:00 PM

I hereby convict you of writing a funny poem. You have earned a get out of prism free ticket. G.L. in the contest! :) gw

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/24/2018 10:19:00 PM

Delighted you enjoyed it ;) thank you Wolfman! xomo

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/24/2018 4:34:00 PM

This is both cute and original. It put a smile on my face, I'm imagining a pair of undies with a cute bear on it, how can anyone resist, lovely poem , gl in the contest Maureen

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/24/2018 10:20:00 PM

Thank you Pixie Dust :)) xomo!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/24/2018 2:40:00 PM

Ooh, that kink! Great piece that should do well in the contest, good luck.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/24/2018 10:21:00 PM

Giggles ;) I have no idea how this will fare. Thank you! xomo

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/24/2018 1:31:00 PM

this made me laugh, maureen - especially the "toss me in prism" line! best of luck in the contest...

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/24/2018 10:21:00 PM

I'm delighted, thank you! xomo :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/24/2018 10:51:00 AM

Clever and intriguing, Maureen. I'll have to see the contest before I can say more. Had a good laugh with "Toss me in prism." Cheers!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/24/2018 12:02:00 PM

Thank you Carolyn! This contest a tough one ;) xomo

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 10/24/2018 10:07:00 AM

You are amazing! ;D I saw the rainbow contest, but was thoroughly stumped... This perfectly fits the prompt and is really funny, too! Great work! ;)

Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/24/2018 2:01:00 PM

hahaha! ;D

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/24/2018 10:19:00 AM

Thank you! I'm with you there, till Cheer Bear underwear happened. I hope it's not too brief ;) xomo!