Rainbow Kink

Toss me in prism
And throw away the key
I'm having a spasm
I'm down on one knee

Cheer Bear underwear


Marry me




10.24.18


Rainbows Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Craig Cornish
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Connelly Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 11:32 AM
Reading this Maureen, is it safe to say that this was meant more then for a contest in content? A brilliant poem!!! Thanks.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 7:03 AM
Heh, ya have to know the Care Bears to get it ;), who knows where the muse goes~
Godwin Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 8:23 PM
Connie nailed the word - unique and that also makes it an eye opener in the best possible way. Fun gem, Maureen! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 10:02 PM
Thank you CayCay! :) hugs! xomo
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 6:10 PM
I will bet Craig will like this clever entry Mo. Your poetry is always unique and fun to read! : )
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 10:23 PM
I hope so :) Thank you Connie, that is the nicest thing to say! Hugs! xomo
Leffanta Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 5:38 PM
Too bad you can't retire on your prism line - clearly a winner - but you lost me on the underwear of which I have zero knowledge. Aloha! Rico
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 10:16 PM
Lol ;) Thankya! The Care Bears were an 8o's phenomenon, stuffed toys and cartoons, films. Cheer Bear was the one with a rainbow on it's belly. My favourite was Grumpy Bear, he had thunderclouds on his. xomo
Wolf Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 4:39 PM
I hereby convict you of writing a funny poem. You have earned a get out of prism free ticket. G.L. in the contest! :) gw
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October 24, 2018 at 10:19 PM
Delighted you enjoyed it ;) thank you Wolfman! xomo
Rose  Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 4:34 PM
This is both cute and original. It put a smile on my face, I'm imagining a pair of undies with a cute bear on it, how can anyone resist, lovely poem , gl in the contest Maureen
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 10:20 PM
Thank you Pixie Dust :)) xomo!
Kiser Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 2:40 PM
Ooh, that kink! Great piece that should do well in the contest, good luck.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 10:21 PM
Giggles ;) I have no idea how this will fare. Thank you! xomo
Bauer Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 1:31 PM
this made me laugh, maureen - especially the "toss me in prism" line! best of luck in the contest...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 10:21 PM
I'm delighted, thank you! xomo :)
Devonshire Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 10:51 AM
Clever and intriguing, Maureen. I'll have to see the contest before I can say more. Had a good laugh with "Toss me in prism." Cheers!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 12:02 PM
Thank you Carolyn! This contest a tough one ;) xomo
Mcferran Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 10:07 AM
You are amazing! ;D I saw the rainbow contest, but was thoroughly stumped... This perfectly fits the prompt and is really funny, too! Great work! ;)
Mcferran Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 2:01 PM
hahaha! ;D
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 10:19 AM
Thank you! I'm with you there, till Cheer Bear underwear happened. I hope it's not too brief ;) xomo!
Green Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 7:52 AM
Very cool. Definitely an abstract view with an unexpected ending...at least by me. : )
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 8:15 AM
He wanted unpredictable, this one may be too skimpy, I'm such a word slut always stripping poems down, hopefully tastefully so ;) xomo!
Cunningham Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 2:51 AM
If Jack sees this you might get a proposal.lol. Tom.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 8:18 AM
LOL you may be right ;) xomo!
Bangalee Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 12:58 AM
for spasm its makes you down on underwear!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 8:19 AM
LOL!!! Too much ;p
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