Rainbow In My World Today

There is a rainbow in my world today,
With every word your write my way.
Colors of emotions flow in harmony,
as they spread across the sky in unity.
Wrap me in your red, orange and blue,
fill me with the violet passion of you.
You make the sky shine after that rain,
softly your soul pushes away the pain.
In every luxurious line that you say,
you are the rainbow in my world today.

11-19-2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Halliday Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 10:45 AM
Lovely
Parry Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 2:33 AM
A beautiful piece of poetry the only line that struggled was line two not sure about 'Write your way' but loved the imagery well done Tim
Marie Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 3:42 PM
Beautiful. After a restless night after reading "Listen", I am back to read more Cas:) "Little Wishes" will always be special, it was the first non lyric, non dark masterpiece of yours I read. It would be great if this beauty could be engraved on every human heart from birth, what a different world we would live in. Your words speak to your incredibly loving, open heart written in a timeless poetic way that spotlights your depth of talent and simply leaves the reader feeling inspired. awesome xo
Richards Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 8:12 PM
Thanks to you, there was a rainbow in my world today, when I saw that my poem was placed in your 'flirt ' contest! Thanks so much, and thank you for this lovely rainbow of a poem!!
Schneiter Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 7:20 PM
Lovely, heart-warming, and poetically eloquent. Wouldn't it be wonderful if everyone could have someone to be a rainbow in their world? Thanks for sharing this ever-so-sweet poem.
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 8:36 AM
Cas, "In every luxurious line that you say" I love the way you rise with gratitude, and painted for your honey, a perfect gift, served on silver platter. Well done. Happy holidays... irisrose...
Bocsa Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 10:18 AM
I liked especially :Colors of emotions flow in harmony... But such a thing happens in rare happy moments.
Bear Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 8:15 PM
May you have many rainbows happy in your love. Wonderfully penned. Hugs and Blessings Edith
Chakrabarty Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 6:08 AM
Great love poem. Love XXXX RAJAT
Allison Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 4:51 PM
beautifully penned Casarah - sure gave me a big smile:-) Hugs Jan xx
Yvonne Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 2:57 PM
What a lucky man. Excellent write.
Nance Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 3:15 PM
Maurice you color my world with your joy and laughter, thank you for brightening up my sky! :)
Meade Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 11:09 AM
May your rainbow filled with so many beautify colors fill you with delight as your words did me!
Nance Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 3:16 PM
thank you David :) shine on!
Ellison Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 10:49 AM
A unique expression of love, my dear Casarah! Lovely! Hope your day is jolly... love and hugs XXX
Nance Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 3:17 PM
Thanks sweetie, I hope yours is filled with happiness as well :)
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 8:45 AM
What a wonderful day when it is brightened by a rainbow. An enjoyable poem to start the day.
Nance Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 3:18 PM
Thank you Brenda you rock :)
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