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Rainbow In My World Today

There is a rainbow in my world today, With every word your write my way. Colors of emotions flow in harmony, as they spread across the sky in unity. Wrap me in your red, orange and blue, fill me with the violet passion of you. You make the sky shine after that rain, softly your soul pushes away the pain. In every luxurious line that you say, you are the rainbow in my world today. 11-19-2014

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Date: 12/21/2018 10:45:00 AM
Lovely
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Date: 7/11/2018 2:33:00 AM
A beautiful piece of poetry the only line that struggled was line two not sure about 'Write your way' but loved the imagery well done Tim
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Date: 8/22/2017 3:42:00 PM
Beautiful. After a restless night after reading "Listen", I am back to read more Cas:) "Little Wishes" will always be special, it was the first non lyric, non dark masterpiece of yours I read. It would be great if this beauty could be engraved on every human heart from birth, what a different world we would live in. Your words speak to your incredibly loving, open heart written in a timeless poetic way that spotlights your depth of talent and simply leaves the reader feeling inspired. awesome xo
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Date: 7/20/2015 8:12:00 PM
Thanks to you, there was a rainbow in my world today, when I saw that my poem was placed in your 'flirt ' contest! Thanks so much, and thank you for this lovely rainbow of a poem!!
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Date: 4/22/2015 7:20:00 PM
Lovely, heart-warming, and poetically eloquent. Wouldn't it be wonderful if everyone could have someone to be a rainbow in their world? Thanks for sharing this ever-so-sweet poem.
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Date: 12/20/2014 8:36:00 AM
Cas, "In every luxurious line that you say" I love the way you rise with gratitude, and painted for your honey, a perfect gift, served on silver platter. Well done. Happy holidays... irisrose...
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Date: 12/10/2014 10:18:00 AM
I liked especially :Colors of emotions flow in harmony... But such a thing happens in rare happy moments.
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Date: 12/9/2014 8:15:00 PM
May you have many rainbows happy in your love. Wonderfully penned. Hugs and Blessings Edith
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Date: 11/21/2014 6:08:00 AM
Great love poem. Love XXXX RAJAT
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Date: 11/20/2014 4:51:00 PM
beautifully penned Casarah - sure gave me a big smile:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/20/2014 2:57:00 PM
What a lucky man. Excellent write.
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Date: 11/20/2014 3:15:00 PM
Maurice you color my world with your joy and laughter, thank you for brightening up my sky! :)
Date: 11/20/2014 11:09:00 AM
May your rainbow filled with so many beautify colors fill you with delight as your words did me!
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Date: 11/20/2014 3:16:00 PM
thank you David :) shine on!
Date: 11/20/2014 10:49:00 AM
A unique expression of love, my dear Casarah! Lovely! Hope your day is jolly... love and hugs XXX
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Casarah Nance
Date: 11/20/2014 3:17:00 PM
Thanks sweetie, I hope yours is filled with happiness as well :)
Date: 11/20/2014 8:45:00 AM
What a wonderful day when it is brightened by a rainbow. An enjoyable poem to start the day.
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Date: 11/20/2014 3:18:00 PM
Thank you Brenda you rock :)

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