Rainbow Forest Maiden

Rainbow Forest

Indian maiden, resting on the verdant, grassy, shore.
White leather, beaded dress.
In moccasins, does dream, she would confess, longing 
for my happiness.
For now, dreams of days of serenity galore!

She,of unknown beauty, does not know.
Of how lovely, she is, truly as gorgeous as the 
diamondesque sparkling stream.
She, was created of glistening metallic dreams.
As an ultramarine light show.

Amazing Star is her name, in this universe aglow.
She of ebonied, flowing hair like a waterfall dream.
She is my Spirit Guide in the land of peaceful, moonbeams.
I meet with her, and other animals, who seem to flow.
Oh, a most fulfilling, flute filled show!

6~7~2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 6/8/2021 3:34:00 PM
Good to have a spirit guide paying attention to you in her dreams Pangie, a beautiful Indian maiden “Amazing Star” is too from your description of her. A lovely read… Belle x
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/8/2021 6:36:00 PM
Glad you liked it Belle" she is a comforting guide, She told me that name. I never created it,, Pangie xx
Date: 6/7/2021 8:58:00 PM
My dear friend, this is such a refreshingly beautiful new creation. The imagery, flow and glow of its positive energy and inspiration awes me. I truly enjoyed this gem. A fav- a gleaming tribute to Native Americans and those of my mother's bloodline. Thanks..
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/8/2021 3:52:00 PM
You are welcome my friend. Your poem brightened my day and that it was about mother's people made it so very special to me. God bless...
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/8/2021 10:59:00 AM
Robert, Thank you for sharing a description of poem itself. I loved writing and envisioning it all.... Merci for FAVIng it. Your Mother's bloodline? Even better ! Appreciatively, Panagiota xx
Date: 6/7/2021 4:32:00 PM
Wonderful, smooth flowing poem, Pangie. Amazing Star is a beautiful Indian name. I enjoyed - Bob
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/7/2021 6:29:00 PM
I, too love that name, it brings up many images, Thank you also for crediting the author,not just the contents. That's exactly what a is to do,and gives direction to a poem Pangie Xx
Date: 6/7/2021 2:27:00 PM
I hope you're taking things easy after your crash landing A lovely poem of native American culture with images of the great prairies and eagles soaring above, I had images of Pocahontas in my head. Tom
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/7/2021 6:22:00 PM
Am recovering slowly, Feel like a boxer KO’d in the ring, to))) I know those images of which you speak. Thank you Pangie xx
Date: 6/7/2021 12:59:00 PM
Lovely write Panagiota, well done...
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/7/2021 1:05:00 PM
Charlie, nice seeing you, this was a truly pleasurable write for me. Pangie xx
Date: 6/7/2021 12:16:00 PM
Hello Panagiota, I enjoyed this lovely poem. Hugs Darlene xx
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/7/2021 3:45:00 PM
Hello Panagiota, you are welcomed. Hugs Darlene xx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/7/2021 1:02:00 PM
Darlene.....so,som so glad you liked it. Thanks Pangie xx
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