Rainbow

Young one softly cries Glancing upwards to the sky A rainbow dries tears

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Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 9/25/2017 8:10:00 PM

Another very nice haiku Pat; your on a roll!~Che :)

Pat Adams
Date: 9/25/2017 9:55:00 PM

Thank you so much Cheryl. I guess I must be butter??

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 9/24/2017 10:02:00 PM

Lovely, brings a smile (it works!)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/25/2017 2:42:00 PM

I do concur :)

Pat Adams
Date: 9/25/2017 8:26:00 AM

Thank you Maureen. I think rainbows are so amazing you just can't not stop to look at them...........80)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/24/2017 4:15:00 PM

Cute imagery:-) hugs Jan xx

Pat Adams
Date: 9/25/2017 8:25:00 AM

Thank you Jan..........80)