Rainbow

Her love is like water I fall in it drown in it Cannot live without it Her love forms a pool of clear water where light plays She is spring rain sunshine on the rain rain falling on sunshine Causing a rainbow to form flowers to grow if this made a sound it would be her laughter adding color to my sunset sky...

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Robin Davis

Date: 9/25/2013 7:05:00 PM

this is a very clever and creative way to show what is in your heart. Lots of emotion and love portrayed. good job

Ken Carroll
Date: 9/25/2013 7:08:00 PM

Hi Robin, Thank you for the lovely comment.. Ken

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/5/2013 1:32:00 PM

A very refreshing and calming poem to read! Very nicely done, I really enjoyed it, Ken!...Thank you for the nice comments on my poem, "The Shy Rose". It really means so much!

Ken Carroll
Date: 9/5/2013 1:38:00 PM

HI Kelly, Thank you for reading this one..I enjoy your writings as well.. Ken

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2013 9:30:00 AM

A lovely title.... thanks... :-)....:-)... LINDA

Ken Carroll
Date: 8/26/2013 9:35:00 AM

Paloma, Thank you.. Besos, Ken

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/28/2013 9:46:00 AM

Kenneth, adding color to your sky. a very charming way of announcing the way she makes your heart feel... another spellbound moment thank you so much... I know this is out of the sudden... Kenneth, you have yourself a new fan... have yourself a good one, my new favorite poet... luv ~Linda

Ken Carroll
Date: 7/28/2013 10:14:00 AM

Gracias mi Linda...I have added you to my favorite poets list...I am your fan as well...Your writing reaches me as it displays a beautiful heart...I wish to share more with you... Ken