Ken Carroll Poet Free verse

Rainbow

Her love
is like water

I fall in it
drown in it

Cannot
live without it

Her love
forms a pool
of clear water

where light plays

She is
spring rain

sunshine
on the rain

rain falling
on sunshine

Causing
a rainbow to form

flowers to grow

if this made a sound
it would be her laughter

adding color
to my sunset sky...

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Robin Davis September 25, 2013 at 7:05 PM this is a very clever and creative way to show what is in your heart. Lots of emotion and love portrayed. good job Ken Carroll September 25, 2013 at 7:08 PM Hi Robin, Thank you for the lovely comment.. Ken

Kelly Deschler September 5, 2013 at 1:32 PM A very refreshing and calming poem to read! Very nicely done, I really enjoyed it, Ken!...Thank you for the nice comments on my poem, "The Shy Rose". It really means so much! Ken Carroll September 5, 2013 at 1:38 PM HI Kelly, Thank you for reading this one..I enjoy your writings as well.. Ken

Poet Destroyer A August 26, 2013 at 9:30 AM A lovely title.... thanks... :-)....:-)... LINDA Ken Carroll August 26, 2013 at 9:35 AM Paloma, Thank you.. Besos, Ken

Poet Destroyer A July 28, 2013 at 9:46 AM Kenneth, adding color to your sky. a very charming way of announcing the way she makes your heart feel... another spellbound moment thank you so much... I know this is out of the sudden... Kenneth, you have yourself a new fan... have yourself a good one, my new favorite poet... luv ~Linda Ken Carroll July 28, 2013 at 10:14 AM Gracias mi Linda...I have added you to my favorite poets list...I am your fan as well...Your writing reaches me as it displays a beautiful heart...I wish to share more with you... Ken