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Rainbow

The smell of fresh rain In a cool country Spring breeze; Rainbow on winter.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/9/2009 11:56:00 PM
I want to be in your poem, it has life as the rains give us also, nice write - James.
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Date: 4/18/2009 11:50:00 AM
Nice haiku, I love the smell of fresh rain......Nice one homie.
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Date: 4/14/2009 1:29:00 PM
Or could give you a cold. Just kidding and loved this piece. enjoy your day.
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Date: 4/14/2009 7:51:00 AM
BEAUTIFUL.
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Date: 4/12/2009 8:55:00 PM
Excellent haiku Tyler, this is a masterful painting of words. I like how you reference the rainbow on winter, indicating that Winter is over. Great job...Raul
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