Rainbow

The smell of fresh rain
In a cool country Spring breeze;
Rainbow on winter.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
May 9, 2009 at 11:56 PM
I want to be in your poem, it has life as the rains give us also, nice write - James.
Lopez Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 11:50 AM
Nice haiku, I love the smell of fresh rain......Nice one homie.
Burton Avatar
April 14, 2009 at 1:29 PM
Or could give you a cold. Just kidding and loved this piece. enjoy your day.
Shahwan Avatar
April 14, 2009 at 7:51 AM
BEAUTIFUL.
Moreno Avatar
April 12, 2009 at 8:55 PM
Excellent haiku Tyler, this is a masterful painting of words. I like how you reference the rainbow on winter, indicating that Winter is over. Great job...Raul
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