Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Verse

Rainbow

dark
                                           heavy
                                           clouds
                                          unrolled
                                     and dampened
                                          the dry
                                           earth.
                                          Slowly, 
                                       from behind
                                   the cloud curtains,
                                        with jetting
                                          rays the
                                             sun
                                         came out
                                     and brushed a
                                            jazzy
                                             arc
                                           in the
                                             sky.


Waltz Wave Contest Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Kim Merryman 
Syllable count: 1,2,1,2,3,2,1,2,3,4,3,2,1,2,3,2,1,2,1. 
Date: 10-06-2021
Placed : 1st

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Kim Merryman June 26, 2021 at 1:38 PM Patri, your waltz wave was smooth flowing with creative descriptiveness. I loved the "jazzy arc"! Congrats on your 1st place win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M Patri Venkata Ramana June 27, 2021 at 5:23 AM Very glad and thanks a lot for the compliments.

Beata Agustin June 24, 2021 at 8:39 PM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... very picturesque. God bless you. Patri Venkata Ramana June 27, 2021 at 5:22 AM Thank you so much for the compliments.

Andrea Dietrich June 24, 2021 at 4:40 PM great image with the jazzy arc!! Congrats for your win. Patri Venkata Ramana June 27, 2021 at 5:21 AM Thanks a lot for your compliments.

Terry Flood June 24, 2021 at 2:57 PM Hey Patri, I’ve written a couple of poems featuring rainbows and really wish I’d thought to call them Jazzy arcs. Congrats on your win in Kim’s contest. Terry Patri Venkata Ramana June 27, 2021 at 5:20 AM Thank you so much for your compliments.