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Rainbow

dark heavy clouds unrolled and dampened the dry earth. Slowly, from behind the cloud curtains, with jetting rays the sun came out and brushed a jazzy arc in the sky. Waltz Wave Contest Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kim Merryman Syllable count: 1,2,1,2,3,2,1,2,3,4,3,2,1,2,3,2,1,2,1. Date: 10-06-2021 Placed : 1st

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Kim Merryman

Date: 6/26/2021 1:38:00 PM

Patri, your waltz wave was smooth flowing with creative descriptiveness. I loved the "jazzy arc"! Congrats on your 1st place win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 6/27/2021 5:23:00 AM

Very glad and thanks a lot for the compliments.

Beata Agustin

Date: 6/24/2021 8:39:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... very picturesque. God bless you.

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 6/27/2021 5:22:00 AM

Thank you so much for the compliments.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2021 4:40:00 PM

great image with the jazzy arc!! Congrats for your win.

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 6/27/2021 5:21:00 AM

Thanks a lot for your compliments.

Terry Flood

Date: 6/24/2021 2:57:00 PM

Hey Patri, I’ve written a couple of poems featuring rainbows and really wish I’d thought to call them Jazzy arcs. Congrats on your win in Kim’s contest. Terry

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 6/27/2021 5:20:00 AM

Thank you so much for your compliments.