Rainbow

Rainbow


Rain turns into mist
sunshine peeking through the clouds
prism paints the sky





As this is my first attempt at haiku,
Any input would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks, RG

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Poet Destroyer A

April 24, 2011 at 1:19 PM

Robin ;-) CONGRATULATIONS!! on your poem being featured this week, hope your enjoying your Easter Sunday. Take care and have a nice one,..p.d

Janette Fisher

April 24, 2011 at 11:41 AM

Many congrats on your feature this week Rgds Janette

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 19, 2011 at 11:52 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Robin. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

April 19, 2011 at 7:42 AM

I think it is wonderful...beautiful imagery...Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Robin. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 18, 2011 at 12:26 PM

Congratulation onyour poem being featured this week, Robin

Debbie Guzzi

September 16, 2009 at 8:09 PM

loverly ! kalidascope! Light & Love

Juliane Thomas

November 27, 2008 at 4:23 PM

Beautiful haiku with lovely imagery. Keep writing!

Nigel Fawcett

November 25, 2008 at 12:06 AM

You're a natural, Robin. Great Haiku that is full of imagery and atmosphere. Love, Nigel

November 24, 2008 at 1:40 PM

Nice use of imagery and personification in this poem. It is an uplifting piece. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. I am glad you are enjoying The Soup. Karen

Keith Bickerstaffe

November 21, 2008 at 6:28 AM

This is superb Robin! Perfect form and flow... the 'p' alliterations are most effective and your language is sublime... Best wishes, Keith

Maryam Jameela Haniff

November 20, 2008 at 3:52 PM

great first time trial. its like a professional's

Kristin Reynolds

November 20, 2008 at 3:04 AM

This is a great first attempt - well done, I can see it all now. :) also, the modern haiku need not be a strict 5/7/5, it can be anyway as long as it does not go over 17 syllables. :) Kristin

Raul Moreno

November 20, 2008 at 12:53 AM

Robin, you are a natural at this, nice 5-7-5 flow. I enjoyed it, great imagery. You painted a lovely picture with a few amount of words. You are as good as the Japanese Masters of haiku Buson, Basho, Issa, and Shiki.

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