Rain Will Fall

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The rain will pour down from the grey clouds above, but I am confident that I will not succumb to it. I will not dissolve or be overwhelmed by lost love. My heart is soft and sensitive, and I am capable of experiencing deep emotions. However, if someone were to leave me, I am strong enough to handle it and won't crumble. I am adducible that the sun will rise, the birds will sing, and even if my heart is hurting, I will persevere. I feel utterly nothing. Written: May 18, 2023

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Susan Lawrence

Date: 5/19/2023 7:22:00 AM

Deep poignant heartfelt words dear Sotto . I feel the depth of your emotions here … beautifully described . You are stronger than you think . I agree with Vijay .. your confidence is apparent . Sending hugs . Love the accompanying photo ! Susan :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/19/2023 4:33:00 AM

I like your photo and the self confidence your poem conveys.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/19/2023 3:01:00 AM

We may try to say we are not hurt or feel other emotions, but, alas, the emotions are there buried down deep, and they come out in some form when we are least expecting them. I hope by putting them in a poem that healing begins from deep down inside. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. I like snapshots of rain droplets where their mirrored effect(you can see the surrounding area in the picture) comes through on the film. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/19/2023 1:13:00 AM

I feel strange. I have never known Malta could have such ugly weather.